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Lol. I Thought That This Was Funny! You Really Had People Thinking That You Was Going To Say Something That Was Deep About When You Really Didn't. But Since I Want To Be Inspirational Keep Doing What You Doing And Make More Like This. You Probably Just Made Somebody Day By This. Geesh This Was Funny! I Actually Laughed A Little.
This poem. It speaks to me.
I have got to say.... this.... this has left me breathless. Never have I read something with such emotion nor have I seen such talent. It is so amazing that I am actually ashamed of my failure as a writer. I will never amount to such greatness. I will now pack up my pens and become a nomad in the woods, never to see paper again.
Anyway, a period at the end and you're set to go! Lol, keep up the funny, you rascal, you!
This brought my to tears. I mean really, deep stuff here. You've got a lot going with this poem: the tits and the boobs. I think the meaning went over my head a bit, but if you could explain it more elaborately I think I would really appreciate that.
Tits and boobs will live on forever.
I am pretty certain this is a topic that involves lots of research and experience.
Hello Kyla here to review you. I have never heard a poem like this before, it is very original. I would like to correct you though. Even though that might be an intertaining subject to you, you have no sentence, or period. I think that you should describe what you think about them, or what you think about the subject. Overall, very weird and interesting but keep it up
Hello Dolan,
~ Don't forget punctuation. You need a period.Shady here with your review.
I assume you submitted this to be funny, and don't really expect a review-- but I can be sarcastic too, so you're getting one.
Also, that's just a phrase-- you need a bit more body (take that as a pun if you wish) to the piece. What about 'tits and boobs'? You like them? They make you drool? You've never actually seen any, but you wish a girl would show a set to you? What about them?
Anyway, that's my thoughts on the matter.
Keep writing!
~Shady
The imagery. The wording. Everything just took my breath away.
You've got talent. They way you string those two words together is very unique.
Keep writing,
This is brilliant.
You've got spunk, kid.