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Re: Influences
Hello! :3 I really like this poem, and the only things that I could nitpick from, others have already pointed them out. But other than the mistakes, this was really ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Gossip Halls
Wow. This is really good and when I read this, I thought about the hallways at my school. xD I liked it.
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Turns Into
Oh, my, how I can relate to this. This just like.. poked my heart a few times. I really loved this, good job. :3
May 28, 2011 -
Re: XXX
Hellooo! As others have said, this is a really good first attempt at poetry, for it isn't really easy to write poems. This one is just a bit too short ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Something
Heh heh, I liked the ending. xD It made me giggle.
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Deleted for Family
Oh, my sweet baby Jesus. This poem was just fantastic! It almost made me cry.. (which is VERY hard to do). Don't change a THING, because it's amazing the way ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: My Attempt at a Sonnet
I really liked this. I'm not really a poet/sonnet expert, so there was no mistakes that I could find. :3 Good job!
May 28, 2011 -
Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!
Hahah, I LOVE this! xD It made me giggle a lot, all the while thinking, "This is so truuee!!"
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Fall Apart
Awww! I like this poem! :D It was really good. As far as I can tell, the people before me seemed to have gotten everything that I've noticed.
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Third Strike, I'm Out
I like it. Maybe because it does relate to me, and it just spoke out to me. Hahah, when I first started reading it I was all, "Mhm-hm." And then ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Nightmares Prologue
Hello all! And thank you for reviewing! :) Okay, a lot of questions was about if this was a dream or not. Trust me, that will be clear in the ...
Mar 27, 2011
