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Kuyoko

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Influences

    Hello! :3 I really like this poem, and the only things that I could nitpick from, others have already pointed them out. But other than the mistakes, this was really ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Gossip Halls

    Wow. This is really good and when I read this, I thought about the hallways at my school. xD I liked it.

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Turns Into

    Oh, my, how I can relate to this. This just like.. poked my heart a few times. I really loved this, good job. :3

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: XXX

    Hellooo! As others have said, this is a really good first attempt at poetry, for it isn't really easy to write poems. This one is just a bit too short ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Something

    Heh heh, I liked the ending. xD It made me giggle.

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Deleted for Family

    Oh, my sweet baby Jesus. This poem was just fantastic! It almost made me cry.. (which is VERY hard to do). Don't change a THING, because it's amazing the way ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Attempt at a Sonnet

    I really liked this. I'm not really a poet/sonnet expert, so there was no mistakes that I could find. :3 Good job!

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!

    Hahah, I LOVE this! xD It made me giggle a lot, all the while thinking, "This is so truuee!!"

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Fall Apart

    Awww! I like this poem! :D It was really good. As far as I can tell, the people before me seemed to have gotten everything that I've noticed.

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Third Strike, I'm Out

    I like it. Maybe because it does relate to me, and it just spoke out to me. Hahah, when I first started reading it I was all, "Mhm-hm." And then ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Nightmares Prologue

    Hello all! And thank you for reviewing! :) Okay, a lot of questions was about if this was a dream or not. Trust me, that will be clear in the ...

    Mar 27, 2011


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