KnightlyAngel09

Quite good, though improvements can be made in the rhyme of this poem. The start flows alright but it doesn't flow as well after the first 4 lines. Excellent though ...

Haha. Thanks coco.:) I'm happy to be a girl though. See ya in our future school.

Absolutely lovely. I loved your beginning. Quite a play on Shakespeare. Great rhythm, beautiful word usage. All your words are so vivid. They're captivating. All in all, amazing. Keep writing. ...

Thanks to those who reviewed. This is a different for me I hardly write free verse and I'm rather apprehensive about it. Anyone else care to help with this piece?

Wow. You improved it. Everything seems to be ok now except for the ending. The question seems rather out of place. I love how you put the things that are ...

I absolutely adore this poem. Bashful boys must read this and learn a lesson from it. It simmers with wisdom. This was also rather comical and at the same time ...

I was going to suggest Percy Jackson but I see you've already got that on your list. Chronicles of Prydain by Lloyd Alexander. First book is called The Book of ...

Oh my, John Donne. I love his poem titled 'The Anniversary'. Brilliant word usage. I don't know how you do it. Sorry, this isn't a reivew but all I have ...

Thanks to those who reviewed. I edited the shalls... Thank you Jack for that. What you said was true. haha. Will makes it more real. Thank you Jon as well, ...

To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee. And you'll be okay with anything by Ernest Hemingway. I suggest A Farewell to Arms.

Er... I edited the typo. Thanks to all who reviewed.

No, I don't think I'm the same person I was when I was twelve Evi. Just kidding. Yes, you have a point there. I am my 12 year-old self except ...

I love these books!:) Finished with the third book recently. Pretty good books for mythology fanatics. They're for kids. We're kids aren't we?:)

Pygmalion and Galatea would be a basis. The Happy Prince would have to be where the idea of a feeling statue came from though.:) The Happy Prince is one of ...

Pin it to a rose? Now that's a nice idea. I haven't gotten to how to give it honestly. I'm still in the convincing myself I should give it stage.:) ...