KnightlyAngel09

I really liked this. Especially your second stanza. This poem flowed really well. This is a great topic to write about. The last stanza before the last line took my ...

I adore poems that begin and end in the same manner. Great job with that.:) This is a love poem but somehow you made it really fresh. Not cliche. I ...

I really liked this. It was like a song of praise in the first part.:) It flowed well. This isn't a very helpful critique but again, this was great.:)

Cute and sweet. I really loved this. It made me think of my little cousin. Amazing job with this. This part: All grown up Is that makeup? I think it ...

Okay. First, gold star. Because this was brilliant. I personally find it difficult to incorporate ideas such as the ones here into poetry but you put it so simply and ...

Hello.:) You're kind of new so welcome here. This poem reminded me of speeches about hope. So, the way I underestood this, it is about hope. I really liked this ...

I really liked this. I thought the spaces between the lines were an overkill though. Sorry, I'm OC. Anyway, this reminded me of Emerson's poetry. Some of poems talk about ...

Nice poem. Loved your structure. It was consistent all through out. So congratz on that. I agree with June though, it was forced in some areas. Hmm.. What I got ...

It was alright. I think though that it lacks in some parts. There wasn't much emotion going on so it made the poem really bland. You said you were inadequate ...

Hey.:) The rhyme scheme here was rather odd. It was different in every stanza. Ok. This review is just really plainly my opinion and others may disagree but I don't ...

Hey. Welcome here.:) I loved the beginning of the poem up until the 'captivates me' line. And then I felt that it got rather bland. The first part had real ...

Great poem. Although I must say I find it odd how all your other stanzas were astronomy stuff then in your final stanza it was all mythology. It threw me ...

Hello.:) And welcome here. Er, first, the repetition was too much. It kills poetry when overused. Anyway, you rhymed quite well. The poem flowed nicely. You used simple vocabulary and ...

This was really rather too short, I think. I mean it works well in some poetry but to me it left a lot of things hanging. Like the emotions aren't ...

I like the end of this poem best.:) All the grammar and punctuation mistakes have been cited already, I belive. Anyway, I think that if you correct that, the flow ...