I adore poems that begin and end in the same manner. Great job with that.
This is a love poem but somehow you made it really fresh. Not cliche. I loved how in the first part it's you wishing for the love once more and then it progresses to you thanking he has found someone that can make him happy. This to me, was like a story simmering beneath the poetry.XD
All in all, this was beautiful. Gold star.
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