KnightlyAngel09

Grand poem once again, comrade. That's called assonace isn't it? The style you used in the last two lines of each stanza? Absolutely lovely. It's amazing when words fit perfectly ...

Cool. The song is from the Fray right? I've honestly never heard of a Villanelle before. Interesting structure. I like the concept behind this poem. There's also some hint of ...

Hello.:) Uhm, first, rhythm and flow was very choppy. Although I don't think that that's too major an issue if you get the message across fine. It's just that often ...

Yeah. His Dark Materials would be perfect. They're not exactly light but they're quite easy to read. Chronicles of Prydain by Lloyd Alexander. First book in the series is called ...

Hi. Punctuation needs help, comrade. Unforunately, I have the same problem with my writing. Though I'm quite sure that's too many commas. Anyway, I really liked this poem. Although I ...

Hey.:) Here's your review. Kalyug The skies darken, As the sun dies. Up in the heavens, The angels cry. The earth burns, In the flames of hell. This day would ...

Percy Jackson and the Olympians by Rick Riordan Chronicles of Prydain by Lloyd Alexander Anything Jane Austen but I highly recommend Pride and Prejudice, and Persuasion.:)

For your math teacher. haha. I'd love to send this as a Valentine's gift for moi Algebra teacher as well.:) Anyway, to review this poem: perfect swear words! Oh and ...

I liked this.:) It's a really simple and vivid poem. Rhythm faltered from time to time, honestly. First in the first stanza and also in the last two lines of ...

I love this.:) However, I still think it needs a few things. The second stanza isn't very vivid. It's also a really cliche way to put the situation. Perhaps present ...

Lovely poem. I shall forever admire your ability to put the core issues of society into great poetry. This was a great and very original concept to write about. It ...

And there it was found. A once strangled hope cried out, I now know I cannot live without; For from your eyes spirits sprout, What else is there to write ...

I love this poem. In this world of darkness In this world of pain there is one who is always here for us. it is hatred (I feel like this ...

THis was absolutely lovely. My only problem was the rhymes sounded forced. Although I wouldn't drop your rhyme scheme for anything. The rhyme scheme was restricting but it added to ...

I give you one nightmare, a mirage and a daydream :arrow: in that order. (three poems following three dreams that occured to me in the past) 1. Windmills Edge I ...