KnightTeen

"As thorns linger beneath your dying skin Evaporating from a soul of angst All that once you wished to be Hatred sprouts from seeds of guilt In childhood times you ...

Yey! An update! A new chapter! Whatever you wish to call it. Wonderful as usual. Just a few things that I want to mention, because after all this is a ...

Hey, HT here to review. I liked this. In fact, I see nothing that has to be changed, except maybe your grammar. And really the only thing that bugs me ...

Hey, HT here to review. Even though the formatting threw me a little, I think that it actually suits this particular piece of poetry. I don't know, I just like ...

Jesus, I'm crying. This was wonderfully written, and I love the lack of dialogue, it gives it character and a touch of whimsicalness. (I wonder if that's even a word? ...

Whenever I review stories/chapters, I typically use a list, so here goes. 1) The prologue should be a separate piece from the rest of the story. The chapters should be ...

This was really good! At first I thought this was a work of poetry, and I started to review it but then I went to look back at the first ...

Hey, HT here to review. I have to say that I agree with Nightlyowl on this. Everything he (or she, if that's the case then I'm sorry) said has a ...

Grammar, spelling, and punctuation wise this is technically perfect. I read the prologue, and became interested in this story so I read this. It was very good plot wise, it ...

Wow. This poem captured the emotions of everyone who has ever felt out of place, like they were invited simply because it was expected and not because they were truly ...

Hey ClaireAura, HT here for a review. Truthfully, this is a wonderful work and it doesn't really need to be changed. However, you might want to consider adding some punctuation ...

This is the first story, short or otherwise that I shall reviewing, so bear with be here. I liked the plot that you had going on here, and I can't ...

Hey, HT here to review. First of all, this in all it's insanity is absolutely brilliant. The narrator questions what reality really is, and explores the harshness of it. Because ...

This is short, sweet, simplistic, and gets directly to the point. I like it. Your rhyming pattern is somewhat inconsistent, and while I do think adjusting it would be a ...

Hey, this was really good and well written. It seems to capture the very essence of internal conflict and drama that we all deal with in these days. Just a ...