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The Knight of Teens

  • Poetry » General, General Re: God took you from me

    Wow. Let me just say that I am sorry for your loss. I know what it's like to lose people who are that close to you. I thank God every ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Just some Somebody.

    This was really good. I thought that you broke up your stanzas well, and that none of them seemed even the slightest bit off. Your punctuation, grammar, and spelling were ...

    Sep 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Horror Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 4

    I told you that you can't get rid of me. Why do you keep bolding out the text? It not really all that necessary. On reaching they noticed Stacie drinking ...

    Sep 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. CHAPTER-3

    I'm bacccckkkkk! You should be warned, now that I'm here, I'm never going to leave. CHAPTER 4 Since you list what chapter this is in the actual title, you don't ...

    Sep 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Horror Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 1 & 2

    Hey, thanks for the review request. It was my first official request that just came out of the blue, from a person that I don't really know well. Well, let's ...

    Sep 4, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: That Girl

    This was pretty good, but I would break it up a little differently and add some more punctuation. It'll be easier to show you than to explain it. Who is ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Clan

    Hey, HT here to review! I thought that this was very good, and that you used your rhyme scheme and rhythm very well. Overall, your grammar is very good, as ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Depression's The Death Of Me

    Hey, HT here to review. I really like this. It's written very well. The punctuation, spelling, and grammar are very good, and unfortunately I can relate very closely to the ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Grey

    Hey, welcome to the sight! I'm your friendly neighborhood HomeschooledTeen here to review! If you have any questions about the site, feel free to PM me at any time. Let's ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Other » Romantic, Spiritual Re: Randomisty writing

    Hey, this is HT here for a review. A bunch of random stuff, when I get bored. Was this part of the poem or just an author's note? Because if ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: A Dreamer by Sight

    Hey, HT here for a review. I thought that this was absolutely amazing. Your imagery is powerful, your language is wonderful, and your grammar, spelling, and punctuation are absolutely excellent. ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: The Demise of Captain Mar McCaw

    This was a very good poem! And I love the rhyme scheme that you have here (I don't care if a poem has or doesn't have rhyme, but I love ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shattered

    Hey, HT here to review. I thought that this was very good. Your content (or plot if you prefer) was a topic that not to many authors choose to use, ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Pack- Chapter One- Wolfe

    Thanks for the link. You know who you are. Darkness. That’s how I am born. Most people are born into light, out of the womb and into the loud, bright ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 11

    You get to post, and I get to read and review. It's a win-win situation. Eli rolled out of bed at around four in the morning. She knew she was ...

    Sep 1, 2013


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