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Re: God took you from me
Wow. Let me just say that I am sorry for your loss. I know what it's like to lose people who are that close to you. I thank God every ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Just some Somebody.
This was really good. I thought that you broke up your stanzas well, and that none of them seemed even the slightest bit off. Your punctuation, grammar, and spelling were ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 4
I told you that you can't get rid of me. Why do you keep bolding out the text? It not really all that necessary. On reaching they noticed Stacie drinking ...
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. CHAPTER-3
I'm bacccckkkkk! You should be warned, now that I'm here, I'm never going to leave. CHAPTER 4 Since you list what chapter this is in the actual title, you don't ...
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 1 & 2
Hey, thanks for the review request. It was my first official request that just came out of the blue, from a person that I don't really know well. Well, let's ...
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: That Girl
This was pretty good, but I would break it up a little differently and add some more punctuation. It'll be easier to show you than to explain it. Who is ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: Clan
Hey, HT here to review! I thought that this was very good, and that you used your rhyme scheme and rhythm very well. Overall, your grammar is very good, as ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: Depression's The Death Of Me
Hey, HT here to review. I really like this. It's written very well. The punctuation, spelling, and grammar are very good, and unfortunately I can relate very closely to the ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: Grey
Hey, welcome to the sight! I'm your friendly neighborhood HomeschooledTeen here to review! If you have any questions about the site, feel free to PM me at any time. Let's ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: Randomisty writing
Hey, this is HT here for a review. A bunch of random stuff, when I get bored. Was this part of the poem or just an author's note? Because if ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: A Dreamer by Sight
Hey, HT here for a review. I thought that this was absolutely amazing. Your imagery is powerful, your language is wonderful, and your grammar, spelling, and punctuation are absolutely excellent. ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: The Demise of Captain Mar McCaw
This was a very good poem! And I love the rhyme scheme that you have here (I don't care if a poem has or doesn't have rhyme, but I love ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: Shattered
Hey, HT here to review. I thought that this was very good. Your content (or plot if you prefer) was a topic that not to many authors choose to use, ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: The Pack- Chapter One- Wolfe
Thanks for the link. You know who you are. Darkness. That’s how I am born. Most people are born into light, out of the womb and into the loud, bright ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 11
You get to post, and I get to read and review. It's a win-win situation. Eli rolled out of bed at around four in the morning. She knew she was ...
Sep 1, 2013
