KnightTeen

Your content is absolutely spot on, it's perfect the way that you kind of insinuate it instead of just coming right out and stating it. It gives the piece this ...

So I have to admit that I was sort of thinking that this would be a funny piece, but I can understand what you mean when you say that this ...

I will admit, freely, that I literally just watched Beauty and the Beast (2017) and so when I read your title after just hearing the song a part of me ...

This was a very powerful piece. It resonates with you, like when you hear a powerful speech or sermon. While the content is excellent and very well written, I have ...

WOW. That's all I can really say. WOW. I'm studying poetry this month in college, and for our exam over the chapter our teacher is making us do spoken word. ...

Living with a set of perfectionist parents, I completely understand where your narrator is coming from. I think that everyone in the world deals with feeling this way sometimes and ...

Hello! KnightTeen here for a review. I haven't read or reviewed the other chapters yet, so I'm just going to review this on its own merit. I thought that it ...

Hello! KnightTeen here for a review. I saw a chapter of this in the Green Room, and I was interested in it since I am a big musketeer fan. so ...

Mess, baby, this is....well, a mess. And I can't really tell if it was intentional or not. I think that you should clean it up and format more like a ...

Hi! KnightTeen here to review! Let's get the nitpicks out of the way first. I remember that day clearly . The sky was blue with no clouds in sight. These ...

Oh dear. Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear, oh dear. We are obsessed, aren't we, my dear Sorcerer? I have one of these waiting somewhere in the wings.... And I ...

Hi! KnightTeen (KT or Teen if you prefer!) here to review. This is my first time ever writing and posting so please criticize as much as you can so I ...

While it's great that you want to advertise the fanfiction story, I think that it would have been better put somewhere it belonged, like in one of the forums or ...

I have to admit, Emergance made me think of Divergent and that is what drew me to your story. Not the thought that it would be like Divergent, just the ...

Annnd I'm back! I have to say, just glancing at this, it looks good! ...jostling me on the spot, and it took all my resolve not to snap and hit ...