KittyCatMeow

Huh. Well, first of all, I believe you should fix every grammar mistake. Also, the genre doesn't match. It should've been more rather "suspense". It doesn't fit otherwise. Okay, onto ...

Huh. Well, first of all, I believe that you should be more repetitive or add more rhyme. That's first. I thought I heard a woman in the trees. Screaming. Crying. ...

Alright. Let me begin. I love the picture that you were able to add. It helps give an explanation to the poem. The rhythm and flow is fabulous, but a ...

Huh. This is probably something that can't be put into a review, for art is merely opinion, but I suppose I'll try to say something. This shouldn't be left in ...

OKAY! Where should I start? The topic here is wonderful or should I say that I would not think of it. However, there are still many things that could be ...

I love how this is short. The message you are trying to give is perfectly fine too. It's true you know? The rhythm flows easily, and that is something hard ...

The story is interesting, but this is full of errors in grammar and spelling. You should definitely look over this. In the mine. "Rarity? where do you get a wagon ...

Well, I can definitely see, and I am not the only one, that this is beautiful and well-written with that dark depressing sense. This doesn't need much improvement, however, it ...

I just read the last sentence of the review below by Nightlyowl. I disagree. The usage of Old English is actually pretty good if you ask me. The repetitive words ...

This story has great imagination, but it has problems too. Hmm, I guess more description could help or more detail. The grammar could you some help as well. Then there's ...

It's interesting. The first stanza was a good introduction because we all know that it's apparently a "monster" as the title states. It waits in the corner As you enter ...

It's a pretty good poem. Your poetry is great. Some of it goes smoothly too. Although however smoothly it goes, it still is a bit rough and forced. That could ...

This is a good piece. It's short, but it's still interesting. I believe you wrote this while feeling depressed as you mentioned. But it's still good to move onward! The ...

This is great. I think the second part gave me an idea that the whole "squad" was a pretty smart group. They are practically the ones who solved the case. ...

This story is going very finely. The plot is interesting, and that insane Mother should stop worrying so much. Will they arrest her? Anyways, I don't believe there's anything wrong ...