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KittyBee

KittyBee-- A poet!

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Breath of Air

    Oh, love is such a very overused subject, truly, truly it really is, and yet I find poems like this one somehow painfully irresistible. Sadly, I'm about to be summoned ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Deleted 50

    Hello! Here to give you a review! Alright, where to begin, I'm going to start off by saying that I truly do admire that you were courageous enough a poet ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: I ate the sun for him

    Hello there! I'm going to review your lovely poetry. I hope you're excited because I'm super excited to review this piece. I'm going to break this up into several sections ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i held onto september

    Hello there! I'm going to review your poetry, now. I quite enjoyed the theme of the poem-- the idea of seasonal drift is beyond lovely, and I enjoy the lack ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: My Cat Ana

    Hahahhey my NAME is Kitty and that's horribly ironic. OHHH WOOOAHAHHOHOHOHO I got it. I got your drift. Your drift. I got it. I caught it. Shazam. Anywho, the idea ...

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Queen Bee

    Hello! Alright, as you may have assumed, I am here to review. I'm going to go over a couple of areas to make the reviewing process easier for me to ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh, give me love

    YES Yes indeed. I love this. I will tell you why. Okay, my motto is creation. Poetry should be an experience, not a conversation. People write to communicate. People write ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: before i wake

    Oh my gosh. I kept seeing this poem and I would get so angry at it because of the title. I was like "Ugh, look at this clearly immature writer ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Traumatized Memories

    Alright, I'm going to do a very quick review on this poem. The only things I really didn't like were these; "I wandered from my neon green painted room, down ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Simpliest Thing

    I hate angsty poems. I really do. Alright, let me just start by saying I have no intention to offend you. I love poetry and linguistics and writing with all ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Scarf

    This is beautiful. I am usually the type to write long, extensive, drawn out reviews that dwell upon every subtle detail of a piece. But I can't. Not this time, ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Release

    B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L Hello, I'm here to review. Haha. Like you couldn't have guessed that. There is but one flaw with this poem. "safety catch, flipped off." Nope. Don't use a comma. ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Windows to Your Soul

    I liked it. But I didn't like it. But I did... But it was weird.. BLAH ON WITH THE REVIEW THEN. I love love love love *love* poems with inconsistent ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: Next Time.

    You lost your theme, bro. I do that sometimes too, even as a well-established poet. Alright so, the shape is a cliche, but who cares, right? I'm just going to ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Stages of Friendship

    I have a love-hate relationship with this poem. What I love: The simplicity, the meaning, the shape, the style-- just the atmosphere. It has this great tone to it and ...

    Dec 29, 2013


fun fact i hear my evil twin once wrote a story about a hacker who used the name fyshi33k bc there are 33k-ish species of fish and she liked phishing so fyshi-33k made sense but then she got super embarrassed when someone forced her to explain
— VyperShadow