Kittengirl2

Hey, this was interesting... Not my favorite, but I do like it. Now I'm wondering which parts are fiction (and what you haven't been telling me)? But then I get ...

This was cute, I like it. I like how each stanza began with 'Come on, Sis,' it shows how the speaker cares and gives a nice flow. I'll have to ...

This is pretty awesome, I like it. Very emotional. “You think that you can just go and love my like you did then throw me away? Typo... I ran and ...

Oh Sar-sar, don't be so hard on yourself. I liked it! ;) I don't think I'll need to kill it, just a few things. Even though you see the things ...

I really like this, it's kind of ironic, and I think lots of people can relate to it. I like how you began each stanza with, 'I hate how...' It ...

I like this. The overall idea is good, and I especially like the last stanza. If you intended the end to be irony, good job. If you didn't, I find ...

This is really good, I like it. This heart, this soul, will never last But I keep the memories of our past I never want to be alone But future's ...

Hmmm, I do believe I remember reading this. And I'm pretty sure I liked it, too. But I'm going to pretend I haven't read any more for now. ;) She ...

That's a really cool style, and you did it quite nicely. I like it. I don't have much to say, other than that last line is way too long. You ...

Interesting. Very good. Although too many sentence fragments. And really short. Nice unexpected ending. Yes, definitely too many sentence fragments. Oh well. Work on that. Sometimes it's ok. But now ...

:D Wow, I loved this. It was exciting, and not boring for a single sentence. Although it could use some more descriptions and details, since right now you mostly have ...

I really liked this, especially the end. Nice descriptions, and most of it flowed nicely, though I had to read it twice to understand it. But that's not necessarily a ...

Too short! Much too short!! Well, I love it anyway. So, she just jumped off a roof, in the dark, when she wasn't even ready because she heard a gunshot? ...

Love it. Nice job. Just a couple things... I would wear do it for you and only you. I don't think you meant to have that 'wear' there... You might ...

Interesting... I like it. Really great descriptions. I think that colorful funky text takes away from it a bit, but it put a smile on my face. Although maybe that ...