A Heart, a Soul

This is really good, I like it.

Mickixoxo wrote:This heart, this soul, will never last
But I keep the memories of our past
I never want to be alone
But future's never set in stone

A heart, a soul, from somewhere near...
I wish for what I cannot hear.
I bear the thought that's deep inside
That sometimes one can never hide.

This heart and soul, are oh so dear,
They hide the weight of all my fear.
Sometimes this thought I can't confide,
This thought of mine will not abide.

This heart, this soul, will never last
But I keep the memories of our past -- remove that article there in order not to affect the rhythm.
I never want to be alone[b],
But future's never set in stone.

My love for you is unsurpassed,
A simple thing is oh so vast.
You're the best I've ever known,
You, my king upon your throne.

Wow, that is good stuff. So emotional yet so effortless, almost. I think you should write a bit more, extend it a bit, but I don't think that particularly matters as it is already amazing.

I'm no poetry queen, so I'm glad to have you as my partner for the pairs poetry contest.
I really like the emotion this holds, and how the words flow together. HUZZAH!