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Kiicoh

  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Mr. Rapist

    I'm not with everyone else... I don't really like it. It could potentially be a great story, but it's not as "incredible" as everyone else is claiming. My best friend ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Fake

    On the contrare to the previous review, I understand completely. That's me. I'm that girl. I know EXACTLY what's being said in that poem because I live it everyday. Those ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A poem for BGL

    I really like this! Although I've never dealt with much discrimination for my sexuality, I have friends that have, and it's horrible. Any nit-picks that i could have pointed out ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Teenage Emergency

    I see you've gotten lots of attention for this beautiful piece of work, so I won't bother with little repeated critques. Great job. Your grammar is great, along with your ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hidden Heroes

    This is ok. Kind of bland, but it's alright. My best friend's town was hit in Alabama. I was hoping for something different out of this. Something more than "thank ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Commitment

    I REALLY like this. I'm officially following you. This poem is short, sweet, and straight-up. I like that. Great job. :) Keep writing! :) xoxo, Kiicoh.

    May 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: An Unsent Letter

    Reading this really disappointed me. I was expecting something really romantic and well written. This "romantic short story" would have been better sent through text message or IM. Maybe a ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Move on for Me

    I enjoyed reading this. The end kinda hit home ("where the heart is" :P). It's so sad! I think the poem could have flowed better, and I didn't really like ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Becoming the Watcher

    This is AMAZING! At first I was like 'Eh, this is alright. it's pretty nice.', but the ending makes the entire poem so strong! It's great. Of course my favorite ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Atrociousness

    I LOVE this. Great job! :) My only critique is: Two delicate flowers, floating on the sea , One’s drowned and broken, the other one’s me - Here you had ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: To My Stalker

    From what I've glanced at, the majority thinks it needs fixing of some sort. I like it just the way it is! :) Good job :) I was amused.

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: So get out

    I did enjoy this piece, but unlike others, I didn't like the use of the F-word. In my eyes, it dulls the piece, and takes away from it's greatness. But ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Global Disaster

    I LOVE this poem. It sees the darkness clouding in that is death, Which reeks of pollution, and its endangered inhabitants. . This doesn't rhyme. It doesn't flow to well, ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Ode to Tigersprite

    I honestly didn't read your entire piece, because I lost a bit of interest after the rhyming scheme ended, but I loved the first stanza. It made me giggle :3 ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tomorrow.

    This reminds me of something that would be in the novel 1984. I like it :). This also kind of reminds me of V for Vendetta. The only thing that ...

    Feb 26, 2011


I will not allow my life's light to be determined by the darkness around me.
— Sojourner Truth