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Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
I'm not with everyone else... I don't really like it. It could potentially be a great story, but it's not as "incredible" as everyone else is claiming. My best friend ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Fake
On the contrare to the previous review, I understand completely. That's me. I'm that girl. I know EXACTLY what's being said in that poem because I live it everyday. Those ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: A poem for BGL
I really like this! Although I've never dealt with much discrimination for my sexuality, I have friends that have, and it's horrible. Any nit-picks that i could have pointed out ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Teenage Emergency
I see you've gotten lots of attention for this beautiful piece of work, so I won't bother with little repeated critques. Great job. Your grammar is great, along with your ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Hidden Heroes
This is ok. Kind of bland, but it's alright. My best friend's town was hit in Alabama. I was hoping for something different out of this. Something more than "thank ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Commitment
I REALLY like this. I'm officially following you. This poem is short, sweet, and straight-up. I like that. Great job. :) Keep writing! :) xoxo, Kiicoh.
May 7, 2011 -
Re: An Unsent Letter
Reading this really disappointed me. I was expecting something really romantic and well written. This "romantic short story" would have been better sent through text message or IM. Maybe a ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Move on for Me
I enjoyed reading this. The end kinda hit home ("where the heart is" :P). It's so sad! I think the poem could have flowed better, and I didn't really like ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Becoming the Watcher
This is AMAZING! At first I was like 'Eh, this is alright. it's pretty nice.', but the ending makes the entire poem so strong! It's great. Of course my favorite ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Atrociousness
I LOVE this. Great job! :) My only critique is: Two delicate flowers, floating on the sea , One’s drowned and broken, the other one’s me - Here you had ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: To My Stalker
From what I've glanced at, the majority thinks it needs fixing of some sort. I like it just the way it is! :) Good job :) I was amused.
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: So get out
I did enjoy this piece, but unlike others, I didn't like the use of the F-word. In my eyes, it dulls the piece, and takes away from it's greatness. But ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Global Disaster
I LOVE this poem. It sees the darkness clouding in that is death, Which reeks of pollution, and its endangered inhabitants. . This doesn't rhyme. It doesn't flow to well, ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: An Ode to Tigersprite
I honestly didn't read your entire piece, because I lost a bit of interest after the rhyming scheme ended, but I loved the first stanza. It made me giggle :3 ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Tomorrow.
This reminds me of something that would be in the novel 1984. I like it :). This also kind of reminds me of V for Vendetta. The only thing that ...
Feb 26, 2011
