Kendastic

Hi, DreamWork! I liked this a lot. The first lines "Is not life a victory? Or is it just merely a curse? really drew me in. It's a powerful opening ...

So, before I read something on this site I look to see how long it is because I'm more of a short story/short poem review kind of gal. This one ...

So, I'm not going to talk about grammatical errors or the one sentence that didn't make much sense to me, because I'm sure you've heard a lot about it. (if ...

Bullying is a very special topic, and I love that you are so interested in it even though you say you've never been bullied at all (or at least to ...

This is good! It really makes you think about how quickly people grow and change. There were a few grammatical errors, and a line or two that didn't make much ...

Okay, I love this. For just writing it off the top of your head, it's amazing. It's powerful and definitely relate-able. Change can be a good thing, but to us, ...

This is awesome. I've never quite read a poem like this before. It flowed beautifully, and the words are simple and fun. The only thing that confuses me is the ...

I love this. To me, it flowed pretty well. A few places are rough, but to me it seems like nothing too much to worry about. It was very dark, ...

Kendastic here to review! This is amazing. Quite a few grammatical errors, but I'll look past that because of how perfect this is. I, too, am a survivor. I have ...

This is absolutely amazing. I don't know if the necklace is a metaphor like others have been saying, but either way this is absolutely beautiful. We shouldn't have to hide ...

This is twisted and I love it. A few comments though. "Uh, okay..." Anna's feet decided to move on their own free will. Each step was slippery, she tried to ...

I love this! You should look into making it a full story! I would buy it off the shelves in a heartbeat. I love the concept. I've heard the question ...

I liked this poem. It's not really a concept I've given much thought before. I'd like to think that if my bedroom walls could talk, they would tell love stories, ...

I absolutely love this. I would love to live in Zaltana. You should make a story surrounding the girl when she's young and her adventures with her Little People. I ...

I love this! I can't wait to read more. I also write little stories in my head, so I totally understand. Before I had a laptop I would write in ...