KelsRich1

This was very cute. It was almost metafiction, which I like. I liked how the piece was short and sweet, some tend to drag on and on. Sorry this is ...

Your grammar was dead on, unless I missed something haha. So good job. I liked this poem it was cute. :) -Kels :D

I LOVED THIS! I really like how you took the original narration, third person omniscient, changed it to first person with Juliet. There were a lot of really great metaphors ...

I like the way this poem flows. It feels like you're in a crash as you read it. It's a really cool effect. There were some grammatical errors. Sometimes it' ...

I liked this poem. I liked how you compared the storm to baking and typewriting. I also like how you used caesura and enjambment throughout the poem. It made the ...

This is a good poem. I liked it. If you want help with grammer on a poem the best way to do it is write it like a regular paragraph ...

This poem is very powerful. Maybe work on clarifying certain parts PM me and we can go into details. Sorry this review is so short I'm in a rush but ...

This was a great poem! I really liked it. The only thing that was a little off to me was that there were a lot of run-on sentences. I do ...

This was a good poem but the rhyme scheme was a little weird. It changed throughout the entire poem and it kind of threw me off when I was reading. ...

WOW! That was a really good story. I know this is going to be a pointless review but I didin't really find anything wrong with it. There wern't any gramatical ...

This was cute and it had a nice meter in the begining. However, some words needed a space between them that they did not have. For example: "cheersengulf" I realize ...

Oh.My.Gods. This was really fun to read. I like how you're using May, a lot of poeple do something with Percy and Annabeth and truthfully, it just gets old. Anyway, ...

Oh my gods! A cookie and Harry Potter!?! If only Ron were there....hahah. Anyway it was really cute and funny. I would just edit the ending a little. Maybe make ...

That was really cute! I loved the imagry and the way you describe the way the bee moves. I never thought about it like "jamming to tunes" hahah. Keep it ...

This was really good! I liked that the conflict was so original and unique. My favorite part was the ending; I love a good twist like that. Personally, I like ...