Hey there! Here's a poem I wrote after reading some of my favorite fantasy books. Yes, it's very juvenile, but it was written to reflect the childish nature that finds its way to the surface with every amazing ending. So:
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Epic poem full of imagery and intense descriptiveness! Great word choice. I really liked
It was great how you made the poem simple but powerful. The rhyming made it more fluid and fun to read. Great job!This was cute and it had a nice meter in the begining. However, some words needed a space between them that they did not have. For example: "cheersengulf" I realize this was probably just a typo but just be careful about those. Make sure you proof read before you post. Also I mentioned before the nice meter you had in the beginging. You kind of lost it at the end but its not a big deal. Over all really cute poem.

-Kels
this is really great! this hero sounds quite mystirious . you don't give much away about him but thats good.