Kelpies

Hello Strangelove, Boy, pronouns are annoying! And besides, the "Fa word" shouldn't exist. People have rights, and just because you like the same gender doesn't mean that everyone else can ...

Hello unknown391625! I like this poem, although something about it made me think something was going to go extremely wrong; Doesn't seem to have though. I like how you expressed ...

Hello Rurouni! Nice work! I like how you made it so that you could almost want the vampire to bite (if you were on a hospital bed about to die ...

Hello NightOwl! I started reading this while it was still in the greenroom, but I had to go and never got a chance to finish it. Well, here I am ...

Hello Flite! This is a nice piece, it really touches one's heart. However, it is not without error: Paths that ran, to the riverside. Woods. Marked with trills of our ...

Hello Craz! I like it, especially the last two lines: But morning's cruel humor is here How wicked can it be?

Hello again Collidaescope! :D Wow, this is... This is in need of words to describe it! Fenominal! I especially like the last lines: So trust me when I tell you, ...

Hello again Deanie! Such a beautiful poem! It flows handsomely, has no errors (that I could find), and has a wonderful point. It, in it's entirety, is wonderful. I have ...

Hello again ancientforever! This is so cool! A dream! It's not that often that I read something like this, and I must say it's a really good change. The thing ...

Hello again Collideascope! Wow, just, wow. This is a wonderful poem, I can definitely see how the world is coming to this. I do believe that love is disappearing off ...

Hello Deanie! This is a great poem! It's a little creepy, but good. I like how you compare their faces to "the crumpled paper of an unwanted idea." I assume ...

Hello Skydreamer! Nice poem! I like the descriptions, although I kind of thought you meant "I didn't like the way you assume" when you said "I'm confused about the way ...

Hello Purple! I really like this poem, it sounds so real with all the metaphors. I like how you compared your love to the tree, as if they were one ...

Hello Collideascope! First off, this poem is awesome!!!!! I especially like how you finished it off with the last line, it really leaves a lasting impression on the readers mind. ...

Hello crissymarx! Nice poem! It clearly describes the relationship between the wolf and the rabbit, whilst all being true. And the last lines for nobody on earth can stop that ...