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Kelisot

Kelisot

  • Script » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: this is not poetry

    Thank you for the review!!! I'm really surprised that someone was able to get some special references here... Amazing!!

    Mar 12, 2022
  • Art » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Stupid puzzle

    It's a review...?

    Mar 10, 2022
  • Short Story » Literature, Spiritual Re: Grigori (Shorts)

    Ah, thanks!! English is my second (or third) language, so I'm working on the grammar, and thank you for the critics!!! I honestly cannot believe that I'm getting so many ...

    Sep 16, 2021
  • Lyrics » Satire, Lyrical Re: Grigori

    Thanks for the review!! But to be correct, the English version doesn't really matter, since one would actually sing the Encrypted version. As long as it's insulting and in a ...

    Sep 8, 2021
  • Lyrics » Satire, Lyrical Re: Grigori

    pffft yes i'll give you 100 points for that @neinty :) But please put the way you decoded in spoilers, please.

    Aug 27, 2021
  • Other » General, General Re: untitled

    Don't worry!!! I was quite afraid when I was posting one of my first works, Mercury, upon YWS. But I got constructive criticism, and I have pride in my own ...

    Aug 26, 2021
  • Lyrics » Satire, Lyrical Re: Grigori

    Good luck solving too. Compared to others I'm planning to release, it's an easy one.

    Aug 25, 2021
  • Lyrics » Satire, Lyrical Re: Grigori

    Like stanza-wise? It represents the stanzas of the song. All of them were encrypted with the same type of cipher.

    Aug 25, 2021
  • Poetry » Satire, Spiritual Re: Mercury

    Wow!!! You did notice the fact that I have purposely capitalized letters on purpose-- yes, some of them were purposely capitalized for a reason. And thank you for the suggestions ...

    Aug 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Spiritual Re: Vendetta

    Thank you!! Thanks for the constructive criticism! I see that some words are repeatitive (I wrote this a time when my Brian wasn't working that well, sorry) but some of ...

    Aug 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Spiritual Re: Vendetta

    Actually, it isn't really done, I accidentally published it when it should still be editing lmao. But no, this isn't my second work, I have another one called Mercury if ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Selfish Desires

    Thank you!!! I don't really have beta readers or anyone else to comment and all, but your comment has just made my day and giving me more inspiration!!! Thank you!!!

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Selfish Desires

    And also fun fact: The first stanza actually was inspired by the mythology of the Hindu goddess Annapurna, so I guessed of having a character who helps... with a twist.

    Aug 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: They told me

    Thanks :)

    Aug 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Selfish Desires

    Dang, thank you for reviewing this poem! And yes, the narrator is... somehow god-like, although they aren't a god. And as for the "gibberish," it's in English, just... ciphered. And ...

    Aug 11, 2021


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