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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: If You Stand in The Rain

    Hi! Kazey here for a short review. I love this piece. I think its so honest and touching and it makes me feel all the feels ever felt. I love ...

    Nov 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: courage

    Hey! Kazey here for a review. So, this poem is pretty evident in the fact that your talking to yourself, right? I really like that. Even that simple touch adds ...

    Oct 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: captured creativity

    Hey! Kazey here for a review! I really love this poem. It reminds me of a couple in the '20s, sitting by a fire in the vintage living room. It's ...

    Oct 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wings

    Hey! Kazey here for a review! I love love love loved this poem. It's so beautiful and horrifying and beautiful again and a whole whirlwind of emotion that make me ...

    Sep 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: I am a Writer.

    Hey, Kazey here for a review. So, I did quite enjoy the piece. I'm a sucker for repetition, and you did a lot throughout the piece. I feel it adds ...

    Sep 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: welcome to San Fransico

    Hi, Kazey here for my thoughts more than a review! So, I really loved this poem. It's very non-traditional in its line layout and overall structure, but I thought that ...

    Sep 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sweet Home

    Hi! Kazey here for a review! I really love the imagery you've got going on here. It was vibrant in my mind and so very beautiful. I think you really ...

    Sep 17, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Paper Airplane

    Kazey here for a quick review! I'm gonna be blunt. I loved this poem. It was so realistic and relatable. The vocabulary you used was incredibly evocative which really brought ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For Frank

    Kazey here for a small review! This was a very interesting piece. Because it's so short, you don't really need to worry about grabbing the readers attention, but i think ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: S.H.

    Kazey here for a short review! I loved this piece. The repetition was simply fabulous and really kept the reader engaged in the piece. You also used a very rich ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Paper Mache

    Kazey here for a short review. Now, don't get me wrong, I do love the idea you're working with here. And I'm going to be very frank. If I offend ...

    Aug 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dysthymia

    Hey! Kazey here for a review! I love this poem. It's so sharp and yet soft and beautiful. I love the rhyme, and (to me anyway) it doesn't feel forced, ...

    Aug 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: How Can One Be Happy?

    Hey! Kazey here to review! I really liked most of what you did here. You told a heartbreaking story in such a raw and emotional way. There was no sugarcoating ...

    Aug 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Sea and Waves

    Kazey here for a review! I really loved this piece, and the comparison you made between the sea and life. it's something I'd not really thought of before, so it ...

    Aug 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Feels

    Hey! Kazey here for a review! This is so beautiful, and really heart-warming, in an odd way. i think a lot of us can relate to this, because we all ...

    Aug 10, 2016


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