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Re: If You Stand in The Rain
Hi! Kazey here for a short review. I love this piece. I think its so honest and touching and it makes me feel all the feels ever felt. I love ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: courage
Hey! Kazey here for a review. So, this poem is pretty evident in the fact that your talking to yourself, right? I really like that. Even that simple touch adds ...
Oct 16, 2016 -
Re: captured creativity
Hey! Kazey here for a review! I really love this poem. It reminds me of a couple in the '20s, sitting by a fire in the vintage living room. It's ...
Oct 16, 2016 -
Re: Wings
Hey! Kazey here for a review! I love love love loved this poem. It's so beautiful and horrifying and beautiful again and a whole whirlwind of emotion that make me ...
Sep 27, 2016 -
Re: I am a Writer.
Hey, Kazey here for a review. So, I did quite enjoy the piece. I'm a sucker for repetition, and you did a lot throughout the piece. I feel it adds ...
Sep 27, 2016 -
Re: welcome to San Fransico
Hi, Kazey here for my thoughts more than a review! So, I really loved this poem. It's very non-traditional in its line layout and overall structure, but I thought that ...
Sep 17, 2016 -
Re: Sweet Home
Hi! Kazey here for a review! I really love the imagery you've got going on here. It was vibrant in my mind and so very beautiful. I think you really ...
Sep 17, 2016 -
Re: Paper Airplane
Kazey here for a quick review! I'm gonna be blunt. I loved this poem. It was so realistic and relatable. The vocabulary you used was incredibly evocative which really brought ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: For Frank
Kazey here for a small review! This was a very interesting piece. Because it's so short, you don't really need to worry about grabbing the readers attention, but i think ...
Sep 1, 2016 -
Re: S.H.
Kazey here for a short review! I loved this piece. The repetition was simply fabulous and really kept the reader engaged in the piece. You also used a very rich ...
Sep 1, 2016 -
Re: Paper Mache
Kazey here for a short review. Now, don't get me wrong, I do love the idea you're working with here. And I'm going to be very frank. If I offend ...
Aug 27, 2016 -
Re: Dysthymia
Hey! Kazey here for a review! I love this poem. It's so sharp and yet soft and beautiful. I love the rhyme, and (to me anyway) it doesn't feel forced, ...
Aug 21, 2016 -
Re: How Can One Be Happy?
Hey! Kazey here to review! I really liked most of what you did here. You told a heartbreaking story in such a raw and emotional way. There was no sugarcoating ...
Aug 21, 2016 -
Re: Sea and Waves
Kazey here for a review! I really loved this piece, and the comparison you made between the sea and life. it's something I'd not really thought of before, so it ...
Aug 10, 2016 -
Re: Feels
Hey! Kazey here for a review! This is so beautiful, and really heart-warming, in an odd way. i think a lot of us can relate to this, because we all ...
Aug 10, 2016
