KayleMission

I like your hook sentence, "One-third of married couples in the U.S met online (Cacioppone, 2013)." I didn't know that until I read your essay. Another, I like the way ...

Your started your essay really well. I like the way you constructed your thesis statement. You also pointed well your ideas. You also ended your essay strongly leaving a question ...

Your hook,"I can't live without it.", really catches my attention. I like how you connect your ideas with each other. "We must remember that technology is here to help make ...

your hook, “One wrong move and you’ll die.”, really catches my attention. I like the way how you connect it with your topic. Your introduction really has strong points. Also, ...

I like the way how you insert your citations and how you connect your own ideas with it. Also, the way you use transitional devices. Overall, it is a very ...

I like the way you point out your ideas. It is really shown in your article but there are some errors in the use of grammar and punctuation marks. Also, ...

your hook,"Technology like art, is a soaring exercise of the human imagination." really catches my attention. It is also true when you say,"We live in a society which we depend ...

“Living without technology is like living without air.”-your hook really makes me curious that made me want to read your article. It made me wonder, what would be our lives ...

your title,"Technology: What would be life without it?", really catches my attention. Also, the way you point out your ideas especially when you cite your own example on how technology ...

i've learned a lot from your article! job well done :)

i've learned a lot from your article! :) job well done!

i've learned lot from your article! :) job well done :)

very well said, benaly :D i've learned a lot :)