Katemabob

Ooh wow I liked this. I found two typos, though. One: "I thought out love was true". I think you mean : "OUR love was true" and Two: "WIll you ...

Um... wow? Kind of random but I loved it! GOLD STAR! You have some pure talent! It makes the reader happy and joyful!!! Yeee! And maybe a little hyper, too. ...

Wao. Good. In the beginning it reminds me of twilight, with the skin gleaming in the sun and the pale white face. O_o So yeah. That is all I really ...

I put my reviews in bold!! :D I can still remember that day, that day so long ago I suggest putting a period here! I was sitting in the passenger ...

I liked this piece. It's just that near the end, the sentences get a bit longer, so I would try to keep them all somewhat the same length. Other than ...

Ha! I like the second one. Lotsa imagination! My reviews are in capitals. I went on a hunt for a ferplabbit I ran into a big old rabbit. MAKE THIS: ...

Ha! I really like this one. You really are quite random sometimes... anyway. I think that the only thing you need to do is: I think you should add a ...

Um. I thought tis poem was okay. You have good writing, but the poem itself just does not seem to flow too well. Um . . . here are some ...

Yay! Finally another person who does not put milk on their cereal! Review: This is a nice and interesting paragraph. You should really try turning it into a poem, like ...

Wow. This was a really nice poem. I really enjoyed it. I would just suggest having less syllables in the first sentence on the last... part. Where it says: "Hiding ...

Wow. This is truly amazing. When I was reading this, I was so into it it is not even funny. This is some really good work, cooldude! And I saw ...

Ha! This is good! As you said, I put in a beat and it was like a little rap song about cheese. I really liked it. The only thing I ...

Ooh I like your poem! There are only a few things I would suggest changing. 1: I think that the the in: "before the flew open" is supposed to be ...

Wow. Do you actually really wake up that early and think of a poem? or does it just come to you... and then you wake up . . . or ...

Wow I like it. I like how you compare it to food. I have never thought of christmas that way, but you are right! First Christmas is really exciting, but ...