KatGirl

Oh. Oops.. lol Your welcome! :)

Well, nitpicks are improving your story, I'm trying to help you. Yes, I've heard of fig. language many times.

It's just a poem I came up with. However, it would be a good book. I'll consider for sure.

I've read Valiant before and the theme of being trapped was like this one; I always love when they're trapped and in a difficult situation, also like the Maze Runner. ...

It's just EXACTLY, accurately how she writes and in-depth. It's really hard to find other books like that, surprisingly I was able to find one so similar on a website. ...

I barely have speech to write anything, but I must say-phenomenal.

Yay! It's long like the Infernal Devices!

OMG IT'S SO DESCRIPTIVE AND I LOVE IT BECAUSE IT'S LIKE THE INFERNAL DEVICES AND I LOVE IT AND WOW I CAN'T EVEN RIGHT NOW. IT'S LIKE JEM WHEN HE ...

Oh, ok. I understand now. Your welcome! :)

I bet it is because it's perfect in grammar so there isn't much to point out :)

I forgot to add that in.... xD Shampoka is her mother lol

Thanks! lol

xD

Amazing! This reminds me of a character in The Infernal Devices.

Oh. I'm dumb not to notice that xD Your welcome!