KaspynPaxian

Wow, that was a very interesting poem! Almost a little Slim Shady-esque. (Ironically, in his song "Mockingbird," the very last line is "If that bird don't sing and that ring ...

Wow, I really like this! Everything you said was so undeniably true as well. It is very moving, and it reminds me of how back in the "good ol' days," ...

Hey there, KaspynPaxian en route down the review highway. This is always a difficult subject to review, because nobody enjoys being sad. However the literal aspect of the poem is ...

Hey there! KaspynPaxian here, wasting letters on my review (because you can read my name lol) Anyways, I see that your minor spelling errors have already been pointed out, so ...

This poem has a powerful, sad tone behind it. The thing i liked the most about it was the last stanza: "All I can do is put on a weary ...

this is a really inspirational poem! the bittersweet reality that all good things must come to a resolution eventually really resounds throughout the few lines here. I've just barely joined ...

This is a powerful poem. I am the type to never cry at movies, or be emotionally moved by things unattached to me, but this work really touched me. My ...

Hi there! This really is a serendipitous poem. I wasnt expecting this little gem when I clicked on it. I am not an avid fan of fantasy, but this poem ...

I agree with Zecru. I would have lifed it better had you left the mystery up to us to determine. Other than that, it was very suspenseful and flowed rather ...

this is a really nice poem you have here. I love the imagery you used throughout the entire poem. my favorite line was "The strings attached to my mouth are ...

I really liked this. It has almost an ominous feel to it with some of the imagery, but imagining your daddy splashing around with a bunch of feathers contrasts that ...

hey there, quick review for ya. I seem to always end up reviewing the saddest poems! I guess they are my favorite. the last two lines were my favorite, as ...

hey there, quick review coming your way I really liked the cheerful, easy-to-relate-with, usage of the words in your poem. it had me smiling and nodding the whole time I ...

WOW. That poem was amazing. the imagery you used floored me. I felt like rolling over and sobbing in my pillow for hours while reading it. my favorite lines: "I ...

Hey, CrystalPony21 I agree with yubbies21, this poem has a strong message behind it. also in agreement, it could use a few touch ups. "You are to good for me, ...