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Re: Joker Missed - Agitated - Chapter 5
Hello. I am here for a review as promised. Grammar and Sentence Mistakes 'She is... Marring... Deadshot?' 'She is... marrying... Deadshot?' ...I guy she barely knew! A guy she barely ...
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Re: Joker Missed - Hunting - Chapter 4
Hey. I am here for another review as promised. Let's get started, shall we? Characters: From my understanding, her name is (Y/N)(L/N)? Mind explaining why that means? The Joker's personality ...
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Re: Joker Missed - Into Hiding - Chapter 3
Hey. I am here for another review. Let's get started, shall we? Overall Since this chapter is short, I don't have much to say about it. All I can say ...
Mar 13, 2018 -
Re: Joker Missed - Noticed - Chapter 2
Hey. I'm back again with another review. Let's get started, shall we? Character: The Joker is so demanding but it did make me giggle. I liked how he became infatuated ...
Mar 13, 2018 -
Re: Joker Missed - Released - Chapter 1
Hello, Archangel. I am here to provide you with a review. Let's get started, shall we? Character: Personally, I love your character. She was remaining positive despite of all the ...
Mar 13, 2018 -
Re: Wings
Hey, ThatGeekyGirl. I am here to provide you a review. Let's get started, shall we? I won't get into any grammar or sentence issues because someone else has already covered ...
Mar 13, 2018 -
Re: Psychic chapter two
Hello, AnimalQueen. I am here for a review. I think I meant to review this but I got side-tracked. Let's get started, shall we? To be honest, even though this ...
Mar 11, 2018 -
Re: Welcome Home - Chapter 1
Hi, WanderlustStardust. I am here with a review. Let's get started, shall we? Characters: Your character, Berri. The way you described her was written well. You provided enough information about ...
Mar 10, 2018 -
Re: My New Life
Hey there. Kanome here with a review for you. Let's get started, shall we? Character: Caitlin seems like a pretty intriguing character, but I wish there was more of her ...
Mar 9, 2018 -
Re: The Elementals of Atara: Prologue
Hey there. Kanome here with a review. Let's get started, shall we? Sentence Structure: When greenery wrapped itself around the world, and animals ran wild and mad through the streets, ...
Mar 7, 2018 -
Re: Psychic
Hello. Kanome here with a review. I saw you posted the second chapter so I decided to read the first one. Nitpicks: I did have Lucinda, and Cassie and John, ...
Mar 5, 2018 -
Re: Surrender
Hey there. Kanome here with a review. Let's get started, shall we? First off, this poem brings out a lot of emotion. What I got from it was sadness, hurt... ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: Ace of Hearts [Chapter 3]
Hii. Kanome here with another review! Let's get started, shall we? Another amazing chapter! Although, if that was me, my reaction would be so much worse if Herobrine knew that ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: Allegory Installment 1
Hello, Kanome here with a review as promised. Let's get started, shall we? Nitpicks: It is a hot, dry day; You had the letter 'I' in bold... did you mean ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: Ace of Hearts [Chapter 2]
Hey. Kanome here with a review as promised. The chapter is very well-written. I don't see anything wrong with the way you explained the setting, characters, plot, etc. So good ...
Mar 4, 2018
