Kanome

Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Well, this story really climaxed into something amazing. I love the tension between the character and the conflict with the little girl. ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review. Wow, this is totally true on many levels. I love reading poetry that is based to true facts about life. It's interesting and it ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review. I like the story, but there are errors that need to be fixed. This piece needs a lot of work to be done before ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I would like to apologize first because I am using mobile right now. Anyways, I love this story so far. You introduced ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I can really connect with this somewhat because I know what it's like to push your negative emotions onto someone who doesn't ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review. The bondness between Angel and Kayta seem to have a deep meaning to it. At least, I think so. When you usually dream about ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review. I noticed in your author's note that you changed your character into a teenager. Make sure you do some changes in chapter one for ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review. Honestly, I saw your third chapter, but in the description, you said to read the first two so here I am. I loved every ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I love the layout of this poem, it gives out the creativeness that you have when it comes to formatting poems. I ...

Hello. Kanome here. To be honest, this is very saddening. I can really connect with this because this has happened to me in the past. Thinking about it makes the ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. First off, welcome to YWS c: It's nice to see new writers on this site. This story has great potential. I love ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review as requested. I love the emotional breakdown of the story. It lets the readers feel how the characters feel, which is a great element ...

Hello, Kanome here with a review. (Using mobile, so review won't be long.) Well, first of all, when you mentioned the energy sword, it reminded me of Star Wars. I ...

Hello, Kanome here with a review. This is honestly the first sci-fi story I have ever read. (Considering the fact I don't read science fiction...) Anyways, I love this story ...

Hello, Kanome here with a review. Also, welcome to YWS. I would like to say that this was a great start for your first story on here, but I think ...