by Kimberlee P.
I understand my lack of friends.
I don’t like you,
I don’t like him,
I don’t like her,
And I don’t like myself in the end.
What I do is not right, this so called, “bully”,
But how can you judge me on my inabilities to:
speak what’s wrong with me,
show that I’m hurting,
admit that I need help,
And I won’t tell anybody.
I’ll keep it to myself and yell at somebody.
Who needs a friend when all they do is misinterpret me?
The bully becomes the bullied.
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Wow, I love this poem. My favorite line is "Who needs a friend when all they do is misinterpret me?" That's often how I feel of a lot of people in my life(I'm not a bully I swear).
I think that this is very well written and I agree with my fellow reviewer that it is very well organized. The repetition of "I don't like" in the beginning gives the lines great impact, it was as if there was a punch with each line. Nice job!
Hello.
Kanome here with a review for you.
I can really connect with this somewhat because I know what it's like to push your negative emotions onto someone who doesn't deserve it. This is a saddening experience some people go through because of their life at home, and show their expressions negatively towards others.
I love the formatting of your poem. It seems well-organized and planned. I love your word usage also. You used the correct terms to express the feelings of a bully, or the bullied. Grammar usage is perfect, punctuation usage is perfect.
Keep up the great work.
I can't wait to read more of your writing.
Keep writing.
Have a great day!
Kanome
Thanks for such a nice review Kanome!