Kaju

Dear queenofscience, I am here to review your beautiful poem. I would start off with a positive comment. I totally enjoyed the way you included a variety of elements to ...

Dear phangirldivergent46, Awesome! You know, I could feel the desperation of the speaker. I generally love personification but this one is the best one I've ever read! I know there ...

Dear Far1812, This is what I call thinking out of the box! It is a completely unique storyline! Thumbs up to your awesome imagination! I loved it to the core! ...

Dear greendog74, I wonder what made you wonder such a different and unique wonder! I mean, I never wondered about such a thing! You really made me wonder but why ...

Dear Savvy, This was an amazing story! Although I couldn't understand this at first I couldn't stop reading it till the end. That, 'I am not the groom' part was ...

Dear kriti, First of all thanks a lot for writing this work! It is a totally relatable concept! Old books with thoughts pencilled on them often remind us of all ...

Dear NatalieRomero, I like your concept! I have read, heard and written quite a number of wish granting stories but this one is presented in a unique way! If this ...

Dear fandomsNmusic, I like your work a lot! It is awesome!!! More than fabulous!!! I can't find words to describe it! It is totally flawless and amazing. Your plot is ...

Dear thepapermonster, You are awesome, friend! I loved your theme, your way of getting the readers hooked and everything else about the storyline. There were a very few flaws in ...

Dear Akshata7, I can see you are new here. You really have good imagination but the thing is that you need to refine the way you put your thought on ...

Dear shekshen, Another awesome work! As I said before you are great at descriptive writing. It not only requires language skills but also deep knowledge on the subject! 1. The ...

Dear Amnesia, You are awesome dear friend! Amazing piece of work! A very short story but displays a big picture! I liked your theme a lot! It is so realistic ...

Dear gammagamerale, Nice poem friend! Good depiction of everybody's life! 1. As others have already mentioned there were a few grammatical errors. 2. I can see repetition which is wonderful ...

Dear shekshen, A wonderful description of olden day Mumbai. I just loved your piece of work. 1. Para 5 and 6 about parks coming alive in summers could have been ...