Kaila

Hi, it's Kaila here for a review! This is a nice poem. It feels strangely depressing and merry at the same time. You do a good job conveying the scene. ...

Hi, it's Kaila here for a review..... Wow. This poem is beautiful, relatable, and truly a piece of art. It isn't too fancy, just simple. I like that. I can ...

Hi! It's Kaila here for a review. Wow! This is really pretty even though it is so short. I actually like the fact that it's so short, for two reasons. ...

Hi! It's Kaila here for a review :) First of all, let me say, I love this poem. It's abstract and sort of vague, but in a good way. I ...

Hiiiii! It's Kaila here for a review. "That's what I do" Okay first let me say that I'm not totally sure if this is a silly poem or a deep ...

Hi! It's Kaila here for a review. First of all, let me say, wow. This is such a beautifully executed piece; you do an excellent job filling a small piece ...

Hi ChocolateChello! It's Kaila here for a review :) I love thissssss!!! It's literally so cute and funny. The fact that it's so short makes it better I think. I ...

Hi it's Kaila here for a review! I thought that this was really good and well written, so props :) I love how the perspective is like the girl talking ...

Hi Kaila here for a quick review! Before I start off, you should know that I haven't read any of your other chapters (I might later but since it's review ...

I love this. It is truly well written, and you do such an excellent job of portraying your and your mother's different reactions to the scenario. You exaggerate your reactions; ...

Nice job! I like this poem; you use sensory details very well. I especially like the details about how one road goes to the left and the other to the ...

Huh. This poem is kind of confusing, but I like it :) You've written it well. I would suggest that you double check your comma use a couple times (like ...

This is pretty good! I really like the way you use metaphors in this poem; I think you do a nice job of it. A couple feedback thingies, though: The ...

This is really good! The way you clearly dedicated each stanza to an emotion worked well. This isn't a fancy metaphorical piece of poetry, it's a simple one. But it's ...

Oh my gosh. This is so good!!!! I love the last stanza especially; you do an excellent job using show don't tell there. I think the repetition is good on ...