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Re: February, 1775 – Scotchtown Plantation, Beaverdam, Virginia
Greetings!! I have come to deliver a review. Before I get started keep in mind that I am using my phone to text out this review so things may be ...
Apr 28, 2024 -
Re: Tear Stains On a Pillow
I really like the theme that you have here. It's a well known feeling of wishing someone else could see the trials and emotional distress that you feel. Yet, this ...
Apr 28, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 2
Yep, I'm back :D Let's dive right in! So for context, I'm reviewing as I'm reading which helps me to not forget anything. Hope that's okay with you. I'm starting ...
Apr 26, 2024 -
Re: chess, rooks, and finger tattoos
Wow!! I really love this piece!! Starting with the beginning, you intrigue the reader by talking about getting a tattoo of a rook. To me (and probably most people) that's ...
Mar 30, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 1
Greetings! It's been a while since I've reviewed, but your piece caught my attention. So here I am. Let's get right in: The opening lines had some excellent description. Phrases ...
Mar 5, 2024 -
Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - 1.5
Hello! Saw that this was just posted and thought to spin by and give it a review. I'm not actually quite sure where I left off. But your short summary ...
Jan 2, 2024 -
Re: Inner Circles
Hello, alpaca! Been a bit since I've reviewed for you, but here I am again! Let's get right in! As always, I really enjoy your poetry. Here we have heartfelt ...
Dec 30, 2023 -
Re: Words Better Left Unsaid, Chapters 1-3
Ahahahahah! Okay I just had to get that out. This piece was crazy well written! Even though we don't see the main character from any point of view but from ...
Dec 30, 2023 -
Re: Fierce
Hello! My beginning thoughts were "whoa, this is deep!" The repetition of the sentence "I am not mad" had me questioning what I had stumbled upon by chance. But then ...
Dec 30, 2023 -
Re: Shadow's Rising Chapter 7 (part 1)
Hey, dragonnight! Yes, I disappeared for a while, but I came back for a bit! Let's get right into the review. The beginning is really well written. I have a ...
Dec 30, 2023 -
Re: Hamas vs Israel
This is such a neat piece! I love how the short sentences add a sense of urgency and longing. Despite this being such a hard topic to write about, you ...
Dec 28, 2023 -
Re: lies i take as truths
Greetings, momo! Sorry it took a while for me to arrive. Life has been on the hectic side, but here I am to inspect a pair of neglected shoes sitting ...
Oct 6, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 2
Huh, so the guy survived (well obviously), and he's all alone, now with no other survivors from his army? That's sad. He's obviously got quite a bit of stamina. He's ...
Sep 4, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 1
Hmmm. I have come to check this out. *taps chin mischievously* I really love your descriptions. Someone mentioned Mulan. I totally agree with that!! But I love the snow and ...
Sep 4, 2023 -
Re: I Never Asked You to Come
Hello, Via! Here to comment on a lovely poem. :) At first I kind of thought this was a metaphorical marathon in which every mile represents another year. But, then ...
Sep 4, 2023
