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Re: Ocean Girl
Oh my word this was so good!! Let me get into it! I review top to bottom so starting at the beginning... I loved your descriptions. They were so, so ...
Jul 24 -
Re: Agents Of Time: Chapter Two; Champagne Problems.
I said I'd be back so here I am! Hmmm I really wasnt expecting the POV to change. I miss James.Verena doesnt interest me quite as much. I also feel ...
Jan 17 -
Re: Agents of Time: Chapter One; The Mansion
I wasnt going to review this, just skim it a bit, but those opening lines have me hooked already so here I go with my first review in over a ...
Jan 15 -
Re: What is your New year's Resolution?
Ooooooooooooooooohhh this is so good!! Let me dive right on in to this poem! First off, I love the rhyme! Having every line rhyme adds a lightheart, fun pace that's ...
Jan 8, 2025 -
Re: Blue Skies Academy - Chapter 6
Greetings! I have come to drop a lil review for you. I review as I go. Let's get into it! My first impressions on this piece I begin with. The ...
Dec 17, 2024 -
Re: To Paxaria: part 1.0
*screechhhhhhh* I made it. A little late, but I'm here. Let's get into it, shall we? I review as I go. Let's go! What, have you never seen a Human ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 11
Whew it's been a crazy day! But here I am to give this a review :D After deciding Jarid would be flight leader the group quickly finished their tour of ...
Oct 1, 2024 -
Re: He killed Himself
Hello, I am here to review for you today :D So honestly I have to say that title was powerful right there cuz that drew me right here. I find ...
Sep 30, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1) Chapter 10 (part 2)
I'm back!! :D Black Squad is basically a misfit squad Oh I knew it! I knew it, I knew it, I knew it!! But Airel...a misfit?? Felicia strikes me as ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 10 (part 1)
Hello! It's been a bit since I've dropped by but I'm back!! Nice dive into the first chapter with the action of being drawn out of a restful sleep (I ...
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Re: Chapter 3: The day I recognized myself
Hey!! I'm back! Let's dive right in! *Splash* leaving a comfortable silence in its wake. I really like this sentence. I'm guessing based on this that she may in fact ...
Sep 27, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 9
Hello! I'm back. Let's get into it. Ah yes! They were about to go through another test. Nice job building up the ominous feeling in the room. He stood on ...
Sep 26, 2024 -
Re: The Heart's Song and the Brain's Tune
Oooh I love this!! Thank you so much for sharing this! Let me get right into this! I love how you took this tour of the human brain and heart ...
Sep 25, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 8
And we're back. The very first thing that caught my attention in the beginning were the claw marks. You never fail to remind the reader of the setting and of ...
Sep 24, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 7
And we're back! Goodbyes are so rough, man. But I'm glad that Jarid is getting excited. sun was making the dew on the ground sparkle and Jarid’s mind was already ...
Sep 23, 2024
