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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 8

    Hello! I am back after a century and jumping right in to the first green room chapter that caught my attention xD. As always, I will be reviewing as I ...

    2 hours ago

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: Oh

    Hello! This piece grabbed my attention and here I am to review it. Took me three reads to get the full richness out of this poem. Let's begin. circle, a ...

    Sep 11, 2024

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative
    Re: Boot Camp

    Hello! I am here to review this piece for you! I review as I go. Let's get started, shall we? The splat of mud greeted his face as he fell ...

    Sep 10, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic
    Re: Everbound : Chapter Two The Satanic Method. Part 2.1.

    Hello! I have arrived! And I'm going to try out a new review method! What glitters! You did a really great job with some of your descriptions. You set the ...

    Sep 9, 2024

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: you & all the dates i should not forget

    Hello! I'm here to review this wonderful poem. I will be reviewing as I read (a second and third time most likely

    Sep 8, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Flames Of Vendetta Part 1

    Hello! I have come to review this piece. I will be reviewing as I go. Let's get into it! First impressions: I have to say that opening line was really ...

    Sep 7, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Mad- Chapter 2

    Hello, hello! I have come to review this little piece I noticed in the green room. I review as I go. Let's get into it! The tea was made of ...

    Sep 7, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Science Fiction
    Re: Bliss Was Ignorance: Chapter 2

    There was no way to remove the OpticLens chip from her brain without the risk of permanent damage, so they left it there. Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa. WHAT?? Okay before ...

    Sep 5, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 8 The travel of self Part 1

    Greetings! I have come to review for you. As always, I will be reviewing as I read. Here goes! So the opening line I felt was just a little weak. ...

    Sep 4, 2024


  • Hello, herbs. It is time I reviewed for a friend. Here goes! As always, I review as I read. Let's go! So first I had to look over the format ...

    Sep 3, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 7

    Hello! Tryna keep up with RevMo and stumbled upon this piece. So here comes a review for yah! I will be reviewing as I go like I always do :D ...

    Sep 2, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor
    Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 1

    Greetings! I have come to review this piece. I will be reviewing as I read so this review will be in chronological order. Shall we begin? All right. I love ...

    Sep 1, 2024

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Re: I Like to Think I'm an Author

    Oooh I really liked the read! You used some great metaphors such as about being a puppeteer or time traveler. All of those sound like such exciting venues and added ...

    Aug 10, 2024

  • Poetry » Health, General
    Re: ankyl-atel-form

    Now that this piece is out of the green room I feel a slight bit more comfortable reviewing as it is poetry and that is admittedly not my strong point ...

    Jun 30, 2024

  • Short Story » Supernatural, Literature
    Re: Call of the Depths

    Hmmm what a piece I appear to have stumbled upon! Let's get right into it! So the very first thing that really popped out to me is the writing style. ...

    Jun 28, 2024


When you cut pieces out of the truth to avoid looking like a fool, you end up looking like a moron instead.
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