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KaiRyu

Just when I thought it couldn't get more awkward....

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: perfect christmas

    Hello! It’s KaiRyu here for a review. It’s been a while so I do hope you forgive me if I leave anything out. First of all, I love how you ...

    Dec 23, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Gryphon's Tail Chapter 4: Only a Fool

    *Rolls in* HoI there, hope you’re ready for a spooky review, cause I’m about to deliver! ^-^ First up is the nitpicking section! In the second to last paragraph, add ...

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Pressure

    *Rolls in* HoI there, hope you’re ready for a spooky review, cause I’m about to deliver! ^-^ First up is the nitpicking portion! "She relieves a little pain." How did ...

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: passion

    *Rolls in* HoI there, hope you’re ready for a spooky review, cause I’m about to deliver! ^-^ First up is the nitpicking portion. "To pour life" an "out" in between ...

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    *Waves* HoI there, KaiRyu here for a review! ^-^ I haven't done this in a while, so please bear with me... "However the dwarf had walked the same path between ...

    Oct 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: With Music On

    *Waves* HoI there, KaiRyu here for a hopefully not terrible review! :P This poem has a great concept and expresses a musical person's needs for music quite well, but I ...

    Oct 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The world i live in-Ch. 1

    HoI there, KaiRyu here for a review, as promised. :P So, since I haven't review in a while, please bear with me.... "Don't worry, it is not a bad thing,"says ...

    Oct 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: serendipity

    Hello there, KaiRyu here for a review! ((If I get some things wrong, I'm sorry... It's been a while since I last reviewed something so I'm a bit rusty. ^-^)) ...

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: do you remember like I do?

    Hello everyone! LadyRanicorn here for another amazing review!! Now, I haven't done a review in a VERY long time so forgive me if it's a little rusty! ^-^ I really ...

    Oct 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Close to Almost

    Hello everyone!! I'm back for another review!! I really enjoyed this poem, the topic was a good one. I liked how in the poem the narrator never really got there ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A help.. PLSSSS

    Hello everyone! LadyRanicorn here for another amazing review! Good job Taha, for being brave and writing a haiku when you know you're no good at it! Let's see, hmm, well ...

    May 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Music

    Hello everyone!! LadyRanicorn here for another amazing review! Wow, I really like this poem! Now I know that this isn't surprising to most of us, I like mostly EVERYTHING, but ...

    May 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Faded

    Hello! This is LadyRanicorn here for another amazing review! I love this poem! If you actually feel this Phan, I be with you... Anyway, on to the review!!! I love ...

    May 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Pens

    Yolo peoples!!! LadyRanicorn here for another AMAZING review! Okay, so, I love this piece of work. It did an excellent job writing this. This poem is probably the one that ...

    Apr 20, 2016
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Mercenary

    Yolo peoples!!!!! LadyRanicorn here for another AMAZING review!!!! Going to start a bit early for this one, so it's totally okay for me to say that I LOVE the first ...

    Apr 4, 2016


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