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Re: perfect christmas
Hello! It’s KaiRyu here for a review. It’s been a while so I do hope you forgive me if I leave anything out. First of all, I love how you ...
Dec 23, 2018 -
Re: A Gryphon's Tail Chapter 4: Only a Fool
*Rolls in* HoI there, hope you’re ready for a spooky review, cause I’m about to deliver! ^-^ First up is the nitpicking section! In the second to last paragraph, add ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: The Pressure
*Rolls in* HoI there, hope you’re ready for a spooky review, cause I’m about to deliver! ^-^ First up is the nitpicking portion! "She relieves a little pain." How did ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: passion
*Rolls in* HoI there, hope you’re ready for a spooky review, cause I’m about to deliver! ^-^ First up is the nitpicking portion. "To pour life" an "out" in between ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Prologue
*Waves* HoI there, KaiRyu here for a review! ^-^ I haven't done this in a while, so please bear with me... "However the dwarf had walked the same path between ...
Oct 23, 2017 -
Re: With Music On
*Waves* HoI there, KaiRyu here for a hopefully not terrible review! :P This poem has a great concept and expresses a musical person's needs for music quite well, but I ...
Oct 23, 2017 -
Re: The world i live in-Ch. 1
HoI there, KaiRyu here for a review, as promised. :P So, since I haven't review in a while, please bear with me.... "Don't worry, it is not a bad thing,"says ...
Oct 8, 2017 -
Re: serendipity
Hello there, KaiRyu here for a review! ((If I get some things wrong, I'm sorry... It's been a while since I last reviewed something so I'm a bit rusty. ^-^)) ...
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: do you remember like I do?
Hello everyone! LadyRanicorn here for another amazing review!! Now, I haven't done a review in a VERY long time so forgive me if it's a little rusty! ^-^ I really ...
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: Close to Almost
Hello everyone!! I'm back for another review!! I really enjoyed this poem, the topic was a good one. I liked how in the poem the narrator never really got there ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: A help.. PLSSSS
Hello everyone! LadyRanicorn here for another amazing review! Good job Taha, for being brave and writing a haiku when you know you're no good at it! Let's see, hmm, well ...
May 24, 2016 -
Re: Music
Hello everyone!! LadyRanicorn here for another amazing review! Wow, I really like this poem! Now I know that this isn't surprising to most of us, I like mostly EVERYTHING, but ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: Faded
Hello! This is LadyRanicorn here for another amazing review! I love this poem! If you actually feel this Phan, I be with you... Anyway, on to the review!!! I love ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: Pens
Yolo peoples!!! LadyRanicorn here for another AMAZING review! Okay, so, I love this piece of work. It did an excellent job writing this. This poem is probably the one that ...
Apr 20, 2016 -
Re: Mercenary
Yolo peoples!!!!! LadyRanicorn here for another AMAZING review!!!! Going to start a bit early for this one, so it's totally okay for me to say that I LOVE the first ...
Apr 4, 2016
