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Kabloozleman

Kabloozleman

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: The Self-Update

    I don't know, where would you be? Sometimes I wish I could get the same deep meaning other people get from poetry.

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Young Lovers Society

    Very abstract. I'm a pretty literal-minded guy, so I don't quite understand it. At all. :/

    Nov 17, 2012
  • Script » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Passing Notes

    Interesting. Out of the blue, I have the overwhelming urge to hold this piece of work against you... Strange...

    May 12, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: LE DIARY

    Le 9gag? 4chan. Interesting, to say the least.

    May 1, 2012
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Dragonborn's Sister

    Overall, I like it. I'm not good at reviews, so... Use more adjectives...? I spotted one of the plot problems you were talking about. The sister is not in the ...

    Apr 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Emo Joke Poem for Fafnir

    My eyes are bleeding from the emo-ness. I like it, though.

    Apr 29, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Secret Diary of a Criminal (Prologue)

    "id=s" happens when someone who is typing fast types "id" instead of "is." They then try to hit the backspace, but miss and hit "=." Not noticing this, they place ...

    Mar 10, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Shadow

    Your shadow is your friend, Everywhere you go, It will follow you until the end, Through the wind and snow. This is all I see. Is there supposed to be ...

    Mar 7, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ocean Like a Lion

    Rawr. I liked it. Good analogies.

    Mar 6, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Twirling

    I haven't twirled before. If you'll excuse me, I'm going to go get a kilt...

    Mar 5, 2012
  • Other » General, Health Re: Consumed

    I'm not good at reviewing, and I can't really find much I disagree with here. This really touched me.

    Mar 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Writing --- A Haiku

    Reading --- A Haiku I just read your 'ku. I think it was pretty good. Hope to see some more.

    Mar 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Secret Diary of a Criminal (Prologue)

    Adrenaline; why do you plague me? Great piece.

    Mar 3, 2012
  • Short Story » Other, Romantic Re: Abuse

    A little kid at church calls me princess all the time. (I have no idea why) He will forever be in my nightmares.

    Mar 2, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mistakes - First Draft

    Holy Crap! I want more!

    Feb 29, 2012


You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better.
— Anne Lamott