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Kabloozleman

Kabloozleman

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: The Self-Update

    I don't know, where would you be? Sometimes I wish I could get the same deep meaning other people get from poetry.

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Young Lovers Society

    Very abstract. I'm a pretty literal-minded guy, so I don't quite understand it. At all. :/

    Nov 17, 2012
  • Script » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Passing Notes

    Interesting. Out of the blue, I have the overwhelming urge to hold this piece of work against you... Strange...

    May 12, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: LE DIARY

    Le 9gag? 4chan. Interesting, to say the least.

    May 1, 2012
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Dragonborn's Sister

    Overall, I like it. I'm not good at reviews, so... Use more adjectives...? I spotted one of the plot problems you were talking about. The sister is not in the ...

    Apr 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Emo Joke Poem for Fafnir

    My eyes are bleeding from the emo-ness. I like it, though.

    Apr 29, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Secret Diary of a Criminal (Prologue)

    "id=s" happens when someone who is typing fast types "id" instead of "is." They then try to hit the backspace, but miss and hit "=." Not noticing this, they place ...

    Mar 10, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Shadow

    Your shadow is your friend, Everywhere you go, It will follow you until the end, Through the wind and snow. This is all I see. Is there supposed to be ...

    Mar 7, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ocean Like a Lion

    Rawr. I liked it. Good analogies.

    Mar 6, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Twirling

    I haven't twirled before. If you'll excuse me, I'm going to go get a kilt...

    Mar 5, 2012
  • Other » General, Health Re: Consumed

    I'm not good at reviewing, and I can't really find much I disagree with here. This really touched me.

    Mar 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Writing --- A Haiku

    Reading --- A Haiku I just read your 'ku. I think it was pretty good. Hope to see some more.

    Mar 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Secret Diary of a Criminal (Prologue)

    Adrenaline; why do you plague me? Great piece.

    Mar 3, 2012
  • Short Story » Other, Romantic Re: Abuse

    A little kid at church calls me princess all the time. (I have no idea why) He will forever be in my nightmares.

    Mar 2, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mistakes - First Draft

    Holy Crap! I want more!

    Feb 29, 2012


May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death.
— An Unknown Bride, Leap Year