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Re: The Self-Update
I don't know, where would you be? Sometimes I wish I could get the same deep meaning other people get from poetry.
Jan 28, 2013 -
Re: Young Lovers Society
Very abstract. I'm a pretty literal-minded guy, so I don't quite understand it. At all. :/
Nov 17, 2012 -
Re: Passing Notes
Interesting. Out of the blue, I have the overwhelming urge to hold this piece of work against you... Strange...
May 12, 2012 -
Re: LE DIARY
Le 9gag? 4chan. Interesting, to say the least.
May 1, 2012 -
Re: The Dragonborn's Sister
Overall, I like it. I'm not good at reviews, so... Use more adjectives...? I spotted one of the plot problems you were talking about. The sister is not in the ...
Apr 30, 2012 -
Re: Emo Joke Poem for Fafnir
My eyes are bleeding from the emo-ness. I like it, though.
Apr 29, 2012 -
Re: The Secret Diary of a Criminal (Prologue)
"id=s" happens when someone who is typing fast types "id" instead of "is." They then try to hit the backspace, but miss and hit "=." Not noticing this, they place ...
Mar 10, 2012 -
Re: Shadow
Your shadow is your friend, Everywhere you go, It will follow you until the end, Through the wind and snow. This is all I see. Is there supposed to be ...
Mar 7, 2012 -
Re: Ocean Like a Lion
Rawr. I liked it. Good analogies.
Mar 6, 2012 -
Re: Twirling
I haven't twirled before. If you'll excuse me, I'm going to go get a kilt...
Mar 5, 2012 -
Re: Consumed
I'm not good at reviewing, and I can't really find much I disagree with here. This really touched me.
Mar 5, 2012 -
Re: Writing --- A Haiku
Reading --- A Haiku I just read your 'ku. I think it was pretty good. Hope to see some more.
Mar 3, 2012 -
Re: The Secret Diary of a Criminal (Prologue)
Adrenaline; why do you plague me? Great piece.
Mar 3, 2012 -
Re: Abuse
A little kid at church calls me princess all the time. (I have no idea why) He will forever be in my nightmares.
Mar 2, 2012 -
Re: Mistakes - First Draft
Holy Crap! I want more!
Feb 29, 2012
