Jurelixranoanad

Hi, J here for a review. My biggest note for this poem is don't force the rhymes just because you feel like you have to. Some of the most beautiful ...

Hi, J here for a review. I liked the subject of this poem and it makes me wonder why the subject gets used so much. I mean is it a ...

Hi, J here for a review I have never seen the Matrix movies but I know some about them. In the little I know about them I have never heard ...

Hi, J here for a review. Well the ending was a little creepy but I love Disney and everything to do with Walt. But anyway on to the story. In ...

Hi, J here for a review. WELCOME TO YWS!!!!!!!! Well a mystery involving magic does sound quite compelling however while reading this I was experiencing 'CHARACTER SOUP" you intro'd so ...

Hi, J here for a review. I read the fist chapter around two weeks ago and I liked it. This chapter was just the same, Juno is still interesting, I ...

Hi, J here for a review. I love the way this poem is written and read. I think that it needed to be read out loud because of the emotional ...

Hi, J here for a review. WELCOME TO YWS!! This is pretty good for your first piece, I do have some notes. In one of the very first sentences you ...

Hi, J here for a review. I loved the plot twist at the end and how you led up to it. The whole story was a bit confusing though it ...

*CRINGES* Hi, J here for a review. Well I'm officially creeped out. I love that story it was creepy and dark and suspenceful. Granted there is some editing to be ...

Hi, J here for a review. I like this story and where it was headed you had nice characters with interesting backgrounds. This may sound weird but I liked the ...

Hi, J here for a review. I'm a big fan of country music so when I saw this in the green room I knew I should review it. So I ...

Hi, J here for a review. I'm not so sure you could even call this a review because I have no corrections. This was a beautiful well-written poem that brought ...

Hi, J here for a review. I like this story, the CEO killing the serial killer only to get blamed himself for being the murderer is one murder mystery I ...

Hi, J here for a review. I feel a flash fiction vibe going here, the sad outlook and a girl who has had nothing but sadness for a while. For ...