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Re: Emily
Hi, J here for a review. Well, I'm crying now, I loved the Aro character then you killed him. I HATE YOU! JK. Anyway on with review, what I obeserved ...
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Re: A World of Blue
Hi, J here for a review. I have spent most of my inbetween class time doing Green Room Reviews today, and this was on of the best poems that I ...
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Re: The Captain Of The Pearl
Hi, J here for a review. If you changed a few words around to better acomadate the tense that you are going for, this would be a really great poem. ...
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Re: Silence & Sound
Hi, J here for a review. This was a great poem and I could see where you were going with it. It just needs to have more. If there was ...
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Ghost
Hi, J here for a review. I love this poem and it felt like it was written about me and for me. I saw that you were trying to talk ...
May 26, 2017 - Re: The Iron Order May 26, 2017
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Re: Confusing Death
Hi, J here for a review. You have a nice rhyme going and it was fairly unforced. You only broke it once and it was a small error. Great poem ...
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Rain of Thoughts
Hi, J here for a review. This was a very nice piece, with a great subject and an amazing character. I loved the ending when she heard the call but ...
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Breaking Up with the Ex... (Oxymoron, I know.)
I'm not even gonna put my usual "Hi, J here for a review" because this ain't gonna be a review. This is gonna be me telling you what a bad ...
May 26, 2017 -
Re: S.P.I. Chapter One
Hi, J here for a review. I have to say I liked this story part of the time and hated it the other part. You start out with no conflict, ...
May 26, 2017 -
Re: but we are all human
Hi, J here for a review. This was a good piece, and I think it would have been better without the quotes. If you're not the Superwoman of Words it ...
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
Hi, J here for a review. Wow, that was a plot twist if I ever saw one. I kept thinking well she is gonna be the princess and he is ...
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Open Letter to Mom pt 2 (formerly Mother's day)
Hi, J here for a review. This was very touching and you are very brave for putting yourself out here like that. I know this is completly irrelevant to the ...
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Leonardo Rosado
Hi, J here for a review. This was a very real poem about a very real subject matter and that's what makes it so great. You talk about a young ...
May 25, 2017 -
Re: Blackout Poem number 2
Hi, J here for a review. I read your first one like this and I have to say this one was better. The content was awesome and the emotional connection ...
May 25, 2017