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Re: Prolouge
Hey, J here for a review. Where to start good or bad. Um I have always believed in let the good news cheer you up so let's go bad first. ...
Nov 13, 2017 -
Re: Chinese Pistache Tree
Hi J here for a review. Well first off thanks for malting this tree known unto me, I don't think I even knew what this tree was until now. But ...
Nov 12, 2017 -
Re: A Letter to Victoria's Secret
Hi, J here for a review. Well I picked this out of the Green Room just to see what you thought about VS and I have to say we have ...
Jun 9, 2017 -
Re: Dear Past Lover
Hi. J here for a review. Well that was a about the most peaceful rant about a no good dirtbag that I have ever seen. I love the emotions that ...
Jun 9, 2017 -
Re: Waiting (Abecedarian Poem)
Hi, J here for a review. I picked this out of the green room because I had no idea what a Abecedarian poem was. After looking up what they were ...
Jun 9, 2017 -
Re: .
Hi, J here for a review. I Love Star Wars. I may have eight different fandoms but Star Wars is the main one. I will start with the things that ...
Jun 8, 2017 -
Re: Guys Like You
Hi, J here for a review. Well I'm glad you got some things off your chest. Even if you have never been through a break up this poem is understandable ...
Jun 8, 2017 -
Re: Guys Like You
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Jun 8, 2017
Hi, J here for a review. Well I'm glad you got some things off your chest. Even if you have never been through a break up this poem is understandable ... -
Re: Save the world.
Hi, J here for a review. Aww, love what a wonderful thing. Ask anybody what they most written about topic is they are gonna say "Love" even though you have ...
Jun 8, 2017 -
Re: Dogs and Tennis Balls, An Essay
Hi, J here for a review. This was an excellent essay. I don't see any grammar mistakes and you kept the paragraphs short enough to be easily read. I do ...
Jun 2, 2017 -
Re: Beach Sand
Hi, J here for a reveiw. This was a cool poem about a time when I'm really positive you had a great time. There was some bugs in this poem ...
May 31, 2017 -
Re: Everything Goes Wrong And Right
Hi, J here for a reveiw. This a was a great story I think my favorite part was the end. It kinda made the whole bad day good. Speaking of ...
May 29, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 1.1 - I think the Earth moved
Hi and happy review day. I have been seeing this story in the green room so I decided to check it out and I like it. I like the chatacters ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Kamen Hero Life Chapter 1
Hi and happy review day. Nice story I really like the beginning you had some very deep descriptions them you added some humor in the dialogue between Misaki and Tachi ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: PAIN
Hi,J here for a review. Thank you for sharing that amazing poem with us. There were a couple places that you broke the rhyme a little bit but it's not ...
May 27, 2017
