Juniper

Hey there Writer in Disguise! I'm June and I'm going to review/critique this for you today. I hope I'm not too harsh on you-- forgive me if I am. The ...

Jon-- This poem = perfect. Absolutely perfect. I mean, like, beyond perfect? It's so short, so simplistic, but yet it holds such a wonderous meaning. I never knew you could ...

Hola Psouth! June here again ^^. Perfect! Having this as your second chapter fits the first perfectly well. I hope you'll keep your chapters around this length in the future ...

Hey there Shiney! (Yeah, I am totally going to call you that o.o or maybe not?) June here; your critic for the moment! This is perfect. When people are upset, ...

Bonjour Mystique Eyes! I'm June, and I will be your critic for right now. (By the way, I love your username! It's so cute) Okay, I love your title. When ...

Hello there Game, I'm June and I'm your critic for the moment. This is a great poem, no doubt. You have a perfect rhyme scheme (A,B,A,C) going here throughout the ...

Hello Ina! I'm June, and I'm your critic for now! I'm going to review this. This "wowed" me. I am completely impressed with your usage of words here. It's simple, ...

Hola there! June here! Wonderful! I have the honor of being your first critic (or critiquer as they say around here). Anyway! Seeing that I have already tortured it, I ...

Hello there LaCroach! I am June, very nice to meet you! Welcome to YWS! Perhaps I shall let you know we have a 2:1 policy here, which simply means that ...

Hey there Yent, Welcome to YWS. I'm June, so nice to meet you. We have a 2:1 policy here which simply means that before you post one piece of your ...

Hey there, June here! Seeing that everyone else has touched on (or shredded!) all of the technical errors that might have/may not have existed, I think I shall overlook all ...

Hey there Angel! June here, and I'm going to review this for you. I'm very picky about repetition in a poem, especially more than once in a stanza. Most of ...

Hey there Radid! I'm June, nice to meet you! You have one cool username there ;). Welcome to YWS! I think I should just let you know that we have ...

Hey there Stori! June here! The title drew me in. Black snow sound fabulous... almost like fantasy. It made me want to read this. Half of me was disappointed when ...

Hi there Stori! June here :) Okay! I've made up a rhythm for this and now you've got me singing it aloud. The song is short and simple-- brilliant. The ...