Juniper

Hi Emillipide! I'm June, your instructor for the moment :) I enjoy the idea of raising a strong point for your audience to pay attention to. It's an eye-opener, and ...

Statik! June here! Eek! I am now officially your biggest fan. I love your poems! :) So! The only thing I found throughout was this: A malevolent force nought but ...

Hey Boz! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you :). I absolutely love this type of poetry! (Found poetry, is it, I believe?) ...

Hey Kirsten! It's June! You should have told me about this thread! I would have been here sooner! Anyway! Let's take a look at your first [s]ginormous[/s] tiny piece. Feed ...

Hi, Alyssa! June here! I haven't much to say on this, other than the fact that I enjoyed it! I disagree. It was not over structured, dear! The only thing ...

Hey Jon! June here! (I've finally gathered something to say :D) Seeing that you... have basically covered everything that I would have mentioned in this poem, silly, I'll just rant ...

Hi Vivacious! *waves* June here, and I'm going to review this cool poem of yours! Let's see, I really liked this! Firstly, because your first stanza made me want to ...

Hi Trin! I'm June, welcome to YWS! Such a sad poem, dear! I hope this isn't based on a real-life event. :( Let's get to work on this :). Im ...

Hi Statik! June here :) Nice work on this! I like the overall picture of this-- very catching. Let's take a look at some minor things, however :). Spraynard mentioned ...

Jarebear! Yay! You've finally got this up! Let's see! *whips out correction pen* There was a concentrated tension in the air, and I wanted to strangle, twist and murder it. ...

Hey there, Dreamwalker! I'm June! How beautiful this is! Let's see! With your description here, I can actually feel and relate to the situation. I can somewhat understand how the ...

Hey Sploosh! (I'm going to call you that :) It's funner than saying "Dark sploosh") I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you :). And, oh! Welcome to ...

Hi Anna! June here, and I'm going to review this for you :). I like the way you open your poem! You begin vaguely, and sustain the "unclarity" throughout the ...

Hey Grimy! I'm June-- I don't believe I've ever reviewed anything of yours before, so here we go. I'll try not to be too harsh on you, either. Let's begin: ...

Hey Kamas! It's June! I said I would review your work and I've finally gotten around to it. I don't think that this needs heavy editing, dear. I think it's ...