I think this poem is great.
that was my favorite line. I am a little confused what the sentinel is doing though. I liked it anyway though.A sentinel of sorts, head bowed to the darkness,
If you want my opinion on the word stop. You could put a . (period) between each letter like this:
S.T.O.P.
But that is if you want your reader to read each letter as if it is on its own. Instead of actually reading the world stop.
Alrighty. Keep writing! I enjoyed this peace.
Points: 1179
Reviews: 42
Donate