Juniper

Hi there, Hailey, June here! As Jasmine said, formatting would help this poem out a bit, because it would give it more of a poetic structure. However, I don't feel ...

Hi, Hailey! I'm June! Welcome to YWS. Poetry is an awesome way to get your feelings out onto paper, or out to the world. I can see that you have ...

Hey there, Blue socks! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, your critic for the moment. Before I begin my review, I just want to say that YWS has a 2:1 ratio ...

Hey Knightly Angel! June here! Wow, this was great! This has to be the best poem I have read from you so far! I loved your rhyme scheme throughout this. ...

Hi there, Amaryllis! June here! I think this poem was rather cute, but I think that you sacrificed the potential to have a good, strong meaning behind this for rhyme. ...

Hey Ross! June here! I haven't seen you or your work around for quite a while! I feel pretty bad critiquing this, because it's a song, and songs are generally ...

Hi Kylan! June here! :) This is a wonderful idea. I'll definitely keep an eye on this thread to look out for updates. For this first poem, granny , I ...

Hey Krupp! Been a long time since I've reviewed you last. To be honest, I think this had a wonderful flow to it. It's so short, but you managed to ...

Hey Jasmine! June here! :D I wish I could offer you some constructive criticism on this, but I can't. I found this extremely well written-- the structure and wording was ...

Hey there, Flyer! June here! I found this to be a pretty nice poem. The stanzas were short, with short verses-- nicely written. I just want to point this out: ...

Hi there Flower! Juniper here! I've seen you reviewing all over the place, and you've got 107 reviews on the leaderboards this month (which is awesome!) so I figured I ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm June (or Juniper) and I'm going to run over this for you quickly. One of the major things about poetry that can never be ...

Aloha Shina! Juniper here! So, it's been a little while since I have reviewed anything of yours. I think this poem has lots of potential, but I don't feel like ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, which means that for every one piece of literature you submit, you should have completed two reviews prior to ...

Auuushy! You have every right now to send me virtual monsters to attack me. I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet! (Really, I'm just eager to get to chapter ...