Juniper

Hey, Hawk! June here! Not too bad of a poem here. :) I'm going to go through a few stanzas of this, pointing out some things I liked, and didn't ...

Hullo, Oza! June here, to review this for you. I really like how you wrote about a place that you went to. I like poems about experiences, because they give ...

Hullo there, Lyndzie! Welcome, welcome. I'm June, your critic for this poem, and do forgive if my say anything absurdly harsh. I mean it in the most genial way as ...

Hey Timmy, :) Again, my apologies for the weird question in chat, haha. I understand that came off far more random than I intended. Let's take a look at this, ...

Hey, Ruby! This isn't bad. I cannot critique much in the waywards of style and all, but you grasped narrative well in this and versed in in archaic language fluently. ...

Hallo, Fixed! I didn't know you did poetry! It's certainly good to see that. I do think this poem is fairly decent -- there are some things I like of ...

Hallo, Tiff! Been a while since I reviewed you! Good to see you writing again. Nonfiction is difficult to review, because I'm a pretty solid critic, and I'm not always ...

Fraaaaank, I haven't reviewed you in so long! I really need to keep a better eye out for your work, because it's always a spark of interest to read. Here ...

Hey Melvin, I reinforce Grif's point about this poem seeming detached. There's not enough in this to make us sympathize with the victims of all of this. I think that ...

Not bad, There are things I like about this -- such as the elegance in some of the words, the flow, the creativity-- and there are others that I don't ...

Hooper! I like this. You have a beautiful narrative style that brings great images to mind -- wonderful tone of blues set forth in here. I genuinely enjoy this. I'd ...

Hey, Nap! A pretty scary poem here. Interesting. Can marrows split open? Marrows are what's in the bone, so by the time it splits open, you know, you're looking at ...

Hey there! Nice work. I can't do rhyme like this, so I applaud you on it. For a first poem, this is actually good. Dreamer said it best about the ...

Hey there, Not too bad -- pay attention to most of what Shina pointed out, because that's some pretty important stuff! As Dreamer said, this is more or less a ...

Hey, Howler! Welcome aboard the nuthouse that is YWS! ;) What a clever idea for a poem! I really like this -- it's wonderful and short and totally clever, but ...