Juniper

Hey there Shina! June here! You know me, so you know how nit-picky I am. I love tearing stuff apart, so pardon my mean-ness. Nothing personal. When reviewing, I try ...

Hey there Jigs! June here! I thought I had reviewed this already. In fact, I have; My internet decided to quit and bribe me into thinking I submitted stuff often. ...

Hey there Lord Gluz! June here! This made me laugh, silly, you did a good job here. It's probably just the "Second person roars and screams" that is making this ...

Hey there Kalliope! June here! From the title, Just Go , I was drawn in. I don't know why, it was a simple, two word phrase; nevertheless, I was pulled ...

Ygaron, no offense. I laughed when I read this. It made me laugh, out loud, uncontrollably. I couldn't help it. June here, by the way, and I can't really review ...

Hey Cat! June here! First off! The title! "To Dream Others' Dream", doesn't suit. It sounds... confusing. So maybe change it to "To dream the dream of others"? Anyway! Onto ...

Hey there Dark Angel! June here! This poem made me feel so guilty. It speaks so much and certainly carries emotion. However: This belongs in other poetry; it's rather free ...

Hey there! June here! Okay, this poem was good. I liked it alot; but the genre is off. Sadly, this isn't lyric poetry. Most often, Lyric poetry rhymes and can ...

Hey there Evan! June here as promised! Seeing that you told me this is based on the book Fahrenheit 451, I understand where this is coming from. However, for someone ...

Hey there! June here! I liked this piece, Andy. It was very well written and clear. I'd dying to know what caused her mother to get so upset here. The ...

It's not quite a story and it's not quite non-fiction, so I decided to post here. Some of you will know what I'm referring to and some of you won't. ...

This is just a preface to a story. It isn't very long, but please let me know what you think :D (Hey there Tierra! I'm June and I am going ...

Hey there JCP! Welcome to YWS! We have a 2:1 policy here which means that for every one piece of work you post you should have completed two reviews. Try ...

Hey there! June here! So! Everyone else has basically covered your grammar issues that lay up there, so I won't do the broken record move and repeat them. Instead, I'll ...

Hey Via! Good poem! You drew me in and didn't disappoint. It's halfway a bit hard to understand, but I'm tired at the moment, so when I "wake up" I'll ...