Published November 27, 2008
Dushnavslo'v.
Alknon Slaveshkl'ovan Deleflechu!
Prostroectosht blentruva!
Plaskent'ova
Lothrosheta eskiroba shlov.
Lohrsketiosha!
Dushnavsslo'v.
Lestos livenshlog!
Ovenschnetu
Loshtuve!
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Ygaron, no offense. I laughed when I read this. It made me laugh, out loud, uncontrollably. I couldn't help it.
June here, by the way, and I can't really review this. But I am, anyhow.
So, ClimberSquirrel hit the nail on the head when she said it basically doesn't make sense.
At first, I thought this was another language, but no language looks like this. When I read something, the words have a certain appeal and somehow I can tell what language it's in. This did not have that appeal. So I threw one of your "words" into google. Guess what came up?
This.
So! You say, that this is based on what it sounds like. That's kind of... brutal in a few ways, dear, because it has to have meaning behind it y'know. Sure, there are loads of meaningless songs out there, but I'm afraid that this isn't an exception.
Dear, no offense, but maybe this belonged in randomness? It's quite random and, no offense, pardon me if I sound rude, but a waste of points for you, and time for all of us.
Something inside of me is nagging me to tell you to make up a meaning for this, just for fun. Nevermind
I can't really say it was good... but... er... try lyrics someday xD.
June
'Twas a good laugh, however, trying to read this aloud.
hahahahahahahahhahahahaha!!
Wow, let me start of by saying I did not understand a single word of your song. Yet in ways I find this very appealing. (: First off is this in German? If not what language am I reading here, well it appears the translators are not decoding it. Otherwise nice flow, love to check out your work another time.
You could have at least gotten my name right. It's a capital 'S.'
And, yes you do! I'm amazed you
talked back to a mod *or junior mod* like that! That kind of behavior could possibly result in being banned if it's bad enough! *Hopes I'm right.*
C-l-i-m-b-e-r-S-q-u-i-r-r-e-l
Climbersquirrel: no, I do NOT have to know what it means!
Suzanne: No, I don't even know what it means, but it does not matter. all that does matter to me is how it sounds in my mind.
yay! Someone agrees with me! *High fives*
Ze'a mer erszty idje. You have no idea what I just said, but I do.
Basically, like everyone else. Speaking in foreign languages or things that sound cool is so much fun, but with songs, stories, poems, anything, if your reader cannot understand what you're trying to say, then no matter how cool it is, it isn't worth it.
^_^ Ker erala, n'ersztili.
I just asked him... He has no CLUE what it means either.
Ygaron, If you are going to post a SONG on here, it has to at least make sense to you! *Stalks off to corner and sulks, wishing a mod or someone would talk to Ygaron about it.*
-ClimberSquirrel
Yah...I have no idea what this means...or even says...I can't even pronounce it!
What about an english translation?
-Kylan