Jpwriter

Ok so this is really good and really creative, but I must admit I'm confused by the story. Were told about maybe someone trapped, in something like a relationship or ...

This is absolutely amazing, this is a piece of art that can only be done by a true artist in the making. I can imagine this coming on the radio, ...

First *enthusiastic clapping* second *more clapping, now that is awesome i love that kind of poetry. So fluent and beautiful, it's deep and tells such an amazing story of, so ...

Ok so this is a great poem, even considering how short it is. it says a whole lot in a low of 13 words, that my good man, or cat, ...

so I'm liking this a lot the format of how you write them is different, of course other writers do something similar, but you giver it something brighter, I'm not ...

This is awesome. one of the things a poet commonly strives for is a meaning in their story the second is it having multiple, yours has that. its deep and ...

OK wow nice cliffhanger, now first more of just something you might want to watch is cussing some people don't like that i don't care and feel it gives a ...

I am orange, awesome color. Navy blue is nice but eh. But for real nice poem, I smiled as I read this. This weird goofy smile that made my sister ...

Annie first off welcome to YWS, second for a newbie your obviously not a noob. your work is awesome. you have a great topic and this is something I could ...

wow this is awesome. I really want to know what's happening, behind the words, behind the laughter I guess. a death, some other tragedy. and to me this feels like ...

nice job I'm glad to see your already have a great story with a few questions and a good idea. I like the humor like Joe setting the teachers beard ...

first off let me get something out, WOOOOOOOOOOW. that was interesting, I like the old idea or saying or whatever of she loves me, she loves me not. its classic ...

I got a bit confused right away, but then I saw it a little easier. I went in think this was about war, but its about several things. what they ...

when say relaxing you mean relaxing wow. I felt it all saw it all "golden sunlight slicing through the dense canopy." wow nice wording I see these awesome colors swirling ...

this i will admit roles nicely and is really interesting,my problem its kinda creepy. i went from okay to wtf i rarely say that and i guess this all is ...