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Heyo! I bring a review to the table :mrgreen: I like this poem! The imagery is well written, the message is a good one, and I like the formatting. "Force ...

Hey! Hopefully I can offer a good review. I like the perspective that this piece brings. I actually recently read an article about the paradox of parenting, how we actively ...

Hi! I like this piece a lot. The way you structure the dialogue to create such an emotional scene is amazing. I have a feeling that the fact that the ...

Dang. Wow. This is a very... I don't really know how to describe it. I would call it a good poem, a beautiful poem, but the thing you are portraying ...

Heyo! I like this poem. I conveys a certain awe and wonder that I (at least) can relate to. I've always kind of been one of those people who's been ...

Heyo! This is such an interesting way to tell a story. I don't know what gender Sam is, just because they're referred to as "man" by Charlie, but is called ...

Wow. This poem tackles some deep things. Religion is definitely something that, throughout history, has bound people together and also ripped them apart. Like in the Crusades. I think you ...

Holy heck, I love this piece. This is beautiful. Although beautiful perhaps has too much of a positive connotation. This is haunting and it strikes me to my core. The ...

I've been looking through all of your poems up till now, and I saw this one, and... wow. The way you mix your words, entwine them into this, makes me ...

Wow. I really, really loved this piece. For one thing, the writing was extremely eloquent and well done. The words just rolled off the page and captivated my mind. Your ...

Holy crap. The way you embodied this... I at first saw just the words, and then the colors came, and I was floating... floating the pictures you painted, floating among ...

This is a really neat story! I liked it a lot. I must say that I didn't realize that the Slugs were humans until the end, and that the person ...

Hey! I haven't reviewed in a while, so bear with me... Wow. That was a lot. I'm sorry if you weren't going with this, but it seemed like the main ...

Heyo! I like this story. I too feel very indecisive about things, and so I relate to Johnny. I like what you put him through. First the grocery stores, then ...

Hey! I saw this and figured I'd leave a review. I liked the story. I've never been married, so I can't compare the feelings you portrayed to real life, but ...