Josie98

Hey!!! Well there are 26 minutes left to review... I hope I can get this in there before the review day ends...:D “Don’t look in the flames, dear one.” I ...

Hey!!! So here to write a review!!! Never done a lyrical review before! :) So I hope this is an ok one...:D 1 verse... Great job!!! You did great! I ...

Hey! So here to write a review! :) Which you made very hard! Honestly there is nothing here that I would suggest you change! You have done a wonderful job! ...

Hey! Your doing good, its a very interesting start to a book and it definitely make you want to keep reading! I couldn't mind the prologue so I wasn't able ...

Hey! Yay! :) Im glad you sent me over here to read this! Im excited about reviewing it! "A black ill fitted right dress." I think you should pull out ...

Hey!!! Haha just had to add to the review list huh? ;) You just beat me to reviewing that last one in the Green Room! Great job by-the-way with that! ...

Hey! Writing a review here for your amazing chapter! :) Your doing a great job! "It was a curse and it was beautiful. She watched the wife sitting at the ...

Hey!!! So Im here to review! :) Hope this is helpful for you! Your doing a great job with this chapter! "Hey," he looked up, and she smiled at him. ...

Hey! Well Im about to collapse... :) so I think this will be my last review! Not only am I new to this but Im also supper tired so I ...

Hey!!! “It’sthe Egyptian symbol of life. Just a space needed between "It's" and "the"...;) "It was like apartof them died with him.” Just another space needed by "apartof" He eyes ...

Hey!!! Yay!!! Im not used to finding books with this sorta slang talking! ;) I love reading it though! This should be a fun review for me! :) “Oh I ...

Hello! "Putting his other hand on hers so he had more control of their positioning, shooting her a look that told her he knew what she was doing and that ...

Hey!!! Ok so chapter nine: "He felt like a giant sun was upon, blocking out the chance for him to use his eyesight." upon *him* maybe! but leaving it at ...

Hi! “Since when did you become my teacher?” he grumbles. “How do you even know all this anyway? You never pay attention in class.” From here to...... here.....> "Along the ...

Hey!!! Im still new at this reviewing so I hope this is helpful, but Im just sorta picking my way through! :D "She stood up, wiped her eyes and looked ...