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Re: Marvin-Chapter 1
Hey Tuesday!!! :P I figure if Im going to catch up to you with these reviews I better get my butt in gear... :P (just kidding ;) ) So anyways, ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 7
Hey there! Ok so just a few things here I thought I would point out! "Tyranos offered. Fleck remembered the dead leaves, written with a single word, Guildless, on it." ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Firing Squad
Hey there! Ok so a pretty short review here...:P you didnt have much for me to comment on...:D (which is a good thing) ;) I liked it, not something I ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Stability
Hey there!!! :) Welcome to YWS!!! :) I see today is your first day!!! :) Always the craziest it seems, so many places to go on this site. Its wonderful! ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Rambling Man Part II
Hey again jay, :) Ok so honestly there was just one thing that I would correct!!! :P I don't even ever have to get a job, Putting "ever" in there ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Rambling Man Part I
Hey jay!!! "The snow was going to start piling up soon" For some reason that line had "piling" under lined and in bold. Not sure if you meant to do ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Oblivion - Chapter Two
Hey there, So Im here to review...:P I literally hate and REALLY avoid coming in during the middle of something, and especially since there is just one chapter before this ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Hope
Hey there! :) Reviewing here! :) I hope this is helpful! So I dont get around to reading poetry much but when you read this in a poetic voice something ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: But it's Been Like This For Days
Hey There!!! "I can't even breath Don't even know how to Stop this insanity" Ok it might just be me, but personally I dont think this part sounds quite right! ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Smile(y) Please!
Hey there, So I wanted to read this cause today I just feel like laughing and your catchy title definitely grabbed me, good job with that! So one thing I ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: Left Brain vs. Right Brain
Hey there, haha I think it took me a minute to settle into the humor, not something I usually review on YWS. on the other hand I have a growing ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: 25 Things to Remember When You Become a Book Character
Hey, :) Omg, this is awesome. I was laughing most of the time and crying from laughter the rest! This was awesome and very true in most cases! :) 18. ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: Cindercow
Hi Blue Africa, Writing a review here, and I have to say when I first started reading I was a little surprised at the way things were going. Not something ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: Life Without Regrets [Chapter Four]
Hey, Here for a review, I hope this is helpful but I really didnt find much here that needed correcting...:) It was very interesting and I enjoyed reading it! :) ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: Warriors of the Wall
Hey, Here for a review...:) I love the way this starts, very interesting right off the bat! Just a few things that I thought I should point out, but I ...
Mar 24, 2015
