Jony

Hey! I'm here to review this extremely well written poem! And I have to say, I really enjoyed reading it! First off, this was just a great work to read, ...

Hey! I'm here to review this work for you. To start of with, I have to say, I really think the subject of this piece is surprisingly unique and original, ...

Hey! Wow, I really liked this poem! (Even if the story seems a bit clichè) I think that it flowed very nicely together and the rhyming structure and scheme was ...

Hey! So, I'm not really used to reviewing poetry but I will try to make this as helpful as possible. So, to start off, I have to say, I really ...

Hey! As I promised, here is your review. So to start off, I have to say that this is a pretty cool idea. I like the way you interpreted heaven ...

Hey, I liked this piece very much! I liked your use of the English sonnet style and I think you did a great job implementing it in the story you ...

Hey, I liked this poem a lot and I thought the first person point of view in this poem was very cool and well done. I loved all the descriptive ...

Hey, so first off, tell your friend that I think she is a great poem and that she should definitely continue writing. So first off, I have to say I ...

Hey, I liked this poem a lot and I thought it was pretty cool and unique. I keep seeing your constant comparisons to loneliness and isolation but it almost feels ...

Hey, wow I loved this poem so much, I think that it is very well written and it is clear that you are a great poet and writer. If I ...

Hey, I liked this poem very much! I think that it is very descriptive and paints a picture in the readers mind. I don't have anything to say in terms ...

Wow, I have to say, this is one of the most unique poems I have read. I loved the way that the poem could be read backwards and forwards, it ...

Hey, I think this is a really good poem and I think the subject of this poem is really unique and creative! So just a few nit-picks; in the third ...

Hey, I think this was really cool and unique! I loved how it flowed and didn't seemed forced, like some dialogue does, I also like the fact that you left ...

Okay, so just to start off, I would say changing your rhyming pattern so it's just not an AA BB CC DD. This is just a suggestion though, I think ...