Jonathan

Okay thank-you for the advice.

If you think you are better than everyone else then you are not thinking right. You also can be kicked off by saying things like this.

I did not re write it I just advised some changes that may make your writing better.

I thought that if you did that on YWS you get kicked off. (I do not really like Jayblu.)

Thanks for the review. The reason I did it like this was because I thought it needed some more telling to it. I made it so that it would be ...

Thank you neon.

Thanks for the review.

Sorry for it being so small.

Thank-you. Very much.

Thanks for the Review.

Nice I love this one.

@Salmank Never ever ever start reviews like that It is a very nasty way of doing it. :[

Thanks for the review Good Writer. :D

I see what you mean. Thanks for the review though...

Thanks for the review but I did not mean it to sound like that up there.